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Blow Away

Feb 01, 2011 01:35

Blow Away
another variation of Jonghyun/Yonghwa/Seohyun
PG
2000 words

( before debut, before Japan, before the marriage )

c.n.blue: p: jonghyun/yonghwa, c.n.blue: c: yonghwa, c.n.blue: c: minhyuk, snsd: c: seohyun, x-over: p: seohyun/yonghwa, x-over: p: jonghyun/seohyun, c.n.blue: c: jungshin, c.n.blue: c: jonghyun, fandom: c.n.blue

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tokyospine February 1 2011, 09:04:46 UTC

O M G, WHAT AN AMAZING SURPRISE, I AM GRINNING LIKE A FOOL. I WAS JUST ABOUT TO GO TO SLEEP TOO, BUT NOPE, FORGET IT.

ahem, ahem! so wait, is this one of those random fics you magically wrote up in the spur of the moment (how do you do eet~?) or is this THE ONE? i don't know, man, i don't know what to do! i feel like i should put this off because then what will i have to read after this??? T______T

how is it that you talk about these little details? like how he toes off his socks, and i know it's just one of those funny little details that's kind of ... you know, on the peripheral, but WTF why am i ^_____^ over how epic this is. (you can probably tell that i'm reviewing as i go along but idgaf.) and like, i don't know, i'm a sucker for this kind of thing, i really am!

ew, two days of not shampooing. lmao, as much as this is stuff i never want to know about people, it's pretty real. and they're boys, so they're gonna be dirty and waaaaah. I AM PREPARED FOR GIANT PROPORTIONS OF GREATNESS. sobs, i really don't want to ( ... )

LOL lj didn't like that i wrote a novel; i didn't know it was so long~ tokyospine February 1 2011, 09:05:19 UTC

and then yonghwa being all emo about his song, and i'm deducting that he's ... i don't know, i'd imagine it would be frustrating on his end, all things considered, but the feelings are there anyway. like wtf are you supposed to do and jong, you have terrible timing.

DIAAAAAAA. T______________T seriously, i have no idea what to do with you. you love dangling the cake in front of me; you're a monster! D; but just - all this was, i can't say it's not wonderful because it was and everything about that last scene kind of hurt in the most unexpected way but still. STILL. not like i'm any better; i, too, stiff one side of the triangle~~ but this will chaaaaaange.

i hate how reading your stories makes me want to write something, but that determination never lasts long enough for me to finish anything. :( this story just made me sad, and i want something to cheer me up. excuse me while i pout pitifully in a corner as my dog snores in my sleeping spot. >_____<

IT DID HAPPEN. EPISODE 6, OMG, I NEED TO FLY OVER TO NY JUST TO PUT IT ( ... )

Re: LOL lj didn't like that i wrote a novel; i didn't know it was so long~ warmboys February 1 2011, 13:44:59 UTC

LOL the reason I didn't tell you was because it was late and I didn't want to bother you ._. also because a part of me is doing the push-and-pull with this fic... :|

it was originally supposed to be with the "first time"!Jonghwa! but I made the mistake of writing it in Jong's POV (LOL I like how this keeps happening) and then the story winded on and it was too late to switch back haha -_- PST IF YOU LOOK HARDER YOU'LL FIND ANOTHER YONGSEO WI P and then I realized that Jongseohwa longfic I wanted to write was probably not going to write itself for... a while, so the first-time one is now a short oneshot on its one OTL OTL OTL and this is a separate story that kind of wrote itself out of laziness... does that even make sense

lolol omg you XDDDDDD <33 erghhh I CAN'T HELP IT when Jonghyun is involved I inevitably gravitate towards him first ( o////// Jonghyun ) (those slashes designate movement) I swear you're the only person who takes joy in the tiniest details ♥ ;___; thank you ( ... )

Re: LOL lj didn't like that i wrote a novel; i didn't know it was so long~ tokyospine February 1 2011, 19:09:54 UTC

PAHAHAHA, it's okay; i do enjoy surprises! the waiting part just sucks butt, but it tapers out eventually. oh, but except these little easter eggs that you do with this secret yongseo HOW DID THIS ESCAPE ME. ~______~ Y U KEEP SECRET. anyway, anyway /asplodeasplode, will get to it after this~ ^^

(i kind of lost you in the middle. but i guess ... that longfic was being an assbutt, so you hacked it apart and now this is what came of it? y/y?)

i snerk. i snerk a lot when i'm reading your comments. i start emitting weird sounds, it's kind of bizarre. only you would take the triangle thing out of context~ ♥

... oh, it happens. i think. WHATEVER, THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND IT'S ALL MUTUAL and i even the balance by tilting it the other two ways. ahahahaha. no but seriously, i am determined to write something where i don't shaft (lol don't, just don't) one side. because i want happiness for everybody! :D

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA DOGS this is gonna be one of those things where i will equate XYZ to wgm or cnb in some fashion.

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fate_otaku February 1 2011, 11:21:23 UTC

awesome. :D

warmboys February 1 2011, 13:47:18 UTC

yay thanks! ♥

htfml haha third time's the charm~ black_silver February 1 2011, 16:17:06 UTC

“What fans?” Jonghyun’s sudden grin surprises Yonghwa ( ... )

why am i so fail today/every day black_silver February 1 2011, 16:19:57 UTC

ok i copied & pasted and didn't italicize this time but i give up /)________(\

i kinda wish jonghyun had his shaggy curly hair again
and that yo~ong was slim again, for you~ ;D

*paws at your door*

Re: why am i so fail today/every day pregnantcigar February 2 2011, 05:48:44 UTC

I love that you threw in a little suicidal edge~ ahh I didn't really mean it to be that literal XD; they do say "Let's kill ourselves" before shows I think! but I'm glad you liked it haha

I feel special whenever you leave detailed comments :)

Did you really watch them all day?

Re: why am i so fail today/every day black_silver February 2 2011, 16:01:09 UTC

asldkfjawe;sr do they really say that???! AHAHAHAHA how special :>

^^ i owe you errythang for bringing cnblue into my laaaaaiiiiifffeeee~~~~~~ ^________^

blaha;sldjr i'd wanted to but i kept getting distracted ;__; are all these episodes only like 20 min long?

:333 happy snow day :D

emberberry February 2 2011, 01:50:49 UTC

I really enjoyed this :D

“I’m getting fat,”
“It’s a sign of happiness,”
this is so cute! and also, I have a friend who refers to her fat as her 'happy' and this part reminded me of that, haha.

the beginning might have been my favorite part, though, but I'm not sure. I was just really really really fond of your tone in this fic, especially. I also love that this is Jonghyun's POV (which is probably why I loved the tone so much~). &hearts

pregnantcigar February 2 2011, 05:53:34 UTC

tokyospine is the one who suggested that his weight gain had to do with marriage-induced happiness :D and since it's become this thing we (...I) like to bring up... a lot. haha. Jonghyun's POV was challenging -- in a good way -- to work through, 'cause he doesn't seem like a really emotional or sentimental sort of guy but the material itself was basically pure angst. hopefully it came out okay though! really glad you enjoyed it :D ♥

shihan_ai February 7 2011, 03:10:59 UTC

gosh this is so pretty and it hurts, but i still love it lots because it's jonghwa and it's written by you and just gah ♥

i love that this is in jonghyun's POV and we get to feel his pain, instead of just being told. he's just so pained, bottling up everything, loving his best friend more than he should...

Jonghyun is too giddy with adrenaline to close his eyes, and he knows Yonghwa’s the same. It’s a rare night when no one messes up and nothing goes wrong. Across the stage they’d made eye contact and known-I’m gonna remember this.

i loved this, that whole part in fact, because it's just so quiet, so simple yet powerful.

it’s always been-been this person right in front of him right now, the jam sessions, the shared mp3s, the headnods and humming and tapping out melodies audible to only the two of them. The exchanged looks. The fist pumps. The sweaty, charged high fives. Let’s kill ourselves. In a way, this whole time he’s been saying, I’ll kill myself for you guys. For you, for you. And especially you.THIS IS JUST SO LOVELY AND ( ... )

warmboys February 7 2011, 03:51:09 UTC

eee this comment!! ♥ ♥ is it weird to say that I feel better about this story after reading your comment?? I'm beyond happy that you liked it :) THANK YOU! ♥

shihan_ai February 7 2011, 04:43:48 UTC

kasdlkf that is a little weird lol but i love you for thinking that :D it's adorable haha /huggles

i love your writing and i love jonghwa and it makes me super happy because they dont get nearly enough love~

/mems this forever ♥

random, but have some weird donghae :D

( ... )

warmboys February 7 2011, 13:51:16 UTC

THIS IS AN ADORABLE GIF TO WAKE UP TO ♥♥♥♥

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