Hi! First time poster, long time follower. I have been collecting bad MRPs / TotalRPs for awhile. Here's a strange one I found while lurking around the Cathedral.
I don't think Mac is a very good Vrykul name. Seeing as how they are you know, barbarians, super primitive, and practically -the- first humans to have appeared on Azeroth, I would suggest the name to follow as such. Even if you were to even decide to be a Vrykul, do some research. It takes < 5 minutes, max. Even a mythology name would have been better than... you guessed it, Old Macdonald. Did you have a farm in Northrend? On top of this, he is 20 years old. Vrykul are ancient. ANCIENT.
Slightly? Slightly taller? Really? Vrykul, if you even just went with how the NPCs / mobs are in WoW are just by their in-game appearance, are practically GIANTS. Why would a a Vrykul even think of joining the Alliance. It is not even a question. Even if this character idea made any sense at all, a Vrykul, even exiled, would join another clan. Really. Seriously. And in case you need your barbarian costume? For what? ERP? Some good 'ole cave screwin'?
First off, it is chief. Not cheif. I before e, except after c. Part of me wants to really analyze this one, and dig into his story. As has been said before, rape is not something that should be used as an excuse for "x" to happen because "rape with person y" occured. Ontop of this, yourname is Macdonald.
Vrykuls: the Fast Food Giants of Northrend: Can I get some fries with this MRP?