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[andaal]

The pokemanz made me laugh. Not evilly. Though dayum, that girl should look up what 'contrived' means.

The futanei... I don't know, guys. It doesn't mention a two-foot cock constantly excreting unlikely substances into a slop bucket tied to a mindslave. Actually it's really quite un-ERP-y. It reads to me more like someone interested in the whole transwhatever/genderbender concept than a MASSIVE SPACEGOAT FUTACOCK ERPER EWWWW.

...Whether they're doing it well or not is a different question entirely. I could do without the abusive husband, perhaps. Not to mention the whole bit about growing up in the Exodar >.>

[farseer_lolotea]

Not to mention the Deus Angst Machina bit about him being "set upon...and given implants."  But I was also mainly struck by the way he failed draenei lore forever.

[gizzybiscuits]

Yeah, why would the consortium do that? They're typically in stuff for a profit, random-ass surgery attacks would seem...Expensive. I kinda thought the husband that 'took a fancy to them' or whatever hired them to do it but I dunno. Needs more explanations of motives.

[thinginthetub]

It seems like they tried turning him into a woman so he could marry this person.

Except then s/he complains about how the people on Azeroth are too focused on gender and not on ~people~. So if it's supposedly not a big deal to their culture, why would they need a sex change...?

[farseer_lolotea]

Yeah, the logic is kind of backwards, and the story is poorly explained.

The "intersex member of a normally highly dimorphic species" concept can be done well.  This ain't it.