qu'est-ce que c'est?? Ainsi tries to write fic.

[war_n_peace]

RL people! please ignore! unless you really want to laugh at me.

soo... this is totally for jazzyjello, who wrote the original, The Law of the Universe a while ago and because I'm an idiot decided to sort of. steal her plot. so really! go read hers instead!!

if I haven't convinced you to leave, well. here goes I guess.

Title: You Can't Win and You Can't

Comments

[jazzyjello]

OMG. AINSI. THIS FIC FILLS IN ALL OF THE MISSING PIECES OF MY FIC SO WELL. I LOVE IT. SERIOUSLY. ♥♥♥

This review was typed as I read, hence the insanity:

But something misfires in your brain, (or so you tell yourself later) and all you can see are his lips, mere inches from you, and you’re kissing him instead.

sadjkas yesss.

I LIKED HOW YOU ADDED THE SCENE WITH INUI. OH INUI. HE IS NEEDED IN EVERY KAIDOH PoV FIC.

AHAHAHAH KAMIO ON A BIKE AFTER HE HAD TALKED TO MOMO WAS A NICE TOUCH.

And his lips, now engrossed in consuming an ungodly mountain of rice in a way that should be disgusting but somehow, isn’t.

THIS IS SO VERYVERY MOMOKAI. :D

Of course, Oishi did congratulate you for going an entire week without a fistfight, so maybe it is something after all.

AHAHAHA OISHI LOVE.

I love what you did with the scene with the flower petals - Echizen smirking at Kaidoh knowingly. Yessss.

Your eyes snap open almost as quickly as they closed, as you realize he is kissing you - rather badly at that -

JNFKDAKLKAD YESSS.

So you grab at his shirt and pull him closer, put your hands in his stupid gross hair, and put your tongue in his mouth.

FNIJDDAKOIOADOIADNAUDO GUH.

He’s asking you if you want to get burgers. You don’t understand how he can be this hungry all the time,

AHAHAHAHA.

You hope he doesn’t see you finally break into a smile.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. KAIDOH, YOU'RE SUCH A DORK. ILU.

AINSI. WHAT WERE YOU TALKING ABOUT. I LOVED THIS. :D

[jazzyjello]

I'm sorry my review is so long. D:

[war_n_peace]

it is not too long!! omg what are you talking about?? I'm soo glad you liked it, I can't believe you liked it, so on and so forth, honestly.

Inui is so much fun to torture, isn't he? Poor thing. XD

and. and. I don't know what else to say, hee. again, glad it was a little fun! ^^