this is a landmark moment
PORN IS HARD... to finish.
Here is where I wave my hands helplessly at you all. Anyone fancy giving 2500~ words of silly J2 PWP a once-over? I'm not looking for betaing so much as someone to say 'YES SUSAN, IT IS HOT' (or, of course, 'NO SUSAN, IT IS NOT'.) (And then perhaps to tell me what rating it should be 'cause IDK!)
Here is where I wave my hands helplessly at you all. Anyone fancy giving 2500~ words of silly J2 PWP a once-over? I'm not looking for betaing so much as someone to say 'YES SUSAN, IT IS HOT' (or, of course, 'NO SUSAN, IT IS NOT'.) (And then perhaps to tell me what rating it should be 'cause IDK!)