I came home like hours bago but I needed time to calm myslef down after seeing their comeback perf -.+ So I'm sorry for this late rep ;_;
Anyway, as I said before, this was a lovely piece of writing to read in the morning (why is it that I always get to read your fiction in the morning? lol). The thought of shy Hyunseung alone could keep me smiling for a long while because he is just THAT cute. But what I love most about this chapter is that you let a sly but so helplessly in love Junhyung lead the doe-eyed to said condition that he was caught in.
Wording wise, this update did not impress me as much as the other chapters did in the past BUT somehow, the flow of the story felt more real (partly because it was told in a simpler way w/o too much abstract things involved) and easier to catch up with! Call me a freak but I could not avoid talking to myself at some point when I 1st read this. Like "Yeah, Junhyung, JUST TAKE HIM ALREADY!" .Well, now that is a bad expamle LOL
There are quite a number of JunSeung fanfictions out there. And I'm so happy that most of them have their own styles! Still, yours and par_no_more's are among the most outstanding ones :)
omg abt the performance thing. i was on school duty so i kinda checked LJ on my cell regularly and when i read "comeback perf" i literally screamed since i've been waiting for that since the TEASER. and this professor was looking at me like i was crazy" what's wrong with you?!" .i almost gave him a reply to that. insane professors. anyway IT WAS AMAZING<33333 i'm in love. AGAIN. damnit,i dunno why but i find Junhyung's hair or...the absence of it...incredibly hot ;O i guess i am just bizzare like that. back to our business though.yes,i decided to let go of the abstract and descriptive matters and focus more on the action since it's a chaptered fic. when i'll write oneshots i shall probably let myself go wild :D i am really glad you found this lovely and also Call me a freak but I could not avoid talking to myself at some point when I 1st read this. Like "Yeah, Junhyung, JUST TAKE HIM ALREADY!" no worries,if that makes you a freak we all are :D i promise i shall deliver the smut very soon :) it will be worth it,i promise ;D though since i'm more of a fan of abstract descriptions...oh nvm,you will see :D
There are quite a number of JunSeung fanfictions out there. And I'm so happy that most of them have their own styles! Still, yours and par_no_more's are among the most outstanding ones :) that's like ...a wonderful compliment,thank you :D i will still try to improve as much as possible,what you said really gave the ambition to do better,thank you ^^
There are many ppl who hate the new hairstyle on Junhyung but I'm totally loving it! Dang, that man can rock any hairdo! Wild haircuts like this suits him better tho cuz Junhyung is your typical bad boy lol
Anyway, I've pretty much figured out that it will be better for a multi-chap if it isnt worded too descriptively too. Cuz as much as I appreciate detailed writing, I find it quite a headache when there's too much of it in a long fiction T_T So glad that you share the same view :)
Ahh, glad you take my compliment as some sort of motivation B) Hope this means i can get the smut soon *bricked* Whether there will be juicy smut in the next chapter or not, I'm sure looking forward to it xD
FINALLY! someone who likes that sexy hair on that freakin'sexy man too <333 It just suits him a lot lot lot :x also,i dunno... i like Hyunseung's hair too! bby's edgy much :D
Yes,we share the same opinion on the matter,i just realized it too. I shall still use my typical ways of describing but less ...well you understand ,right? i need to write a oneshot soon. It would be a challenge for me actually :x
hahah,no worries. even if i don't post smut in the next chapter ,i finished the last one so...you will probably have them both in the same day...or one day apart :) thank you for looking forward to it hahah.your comments are one of the things that keep me 'wired',so to speak^^
I like Seungie's uneven bangs style cuz it's just so HyunSeung-ish. I mean, normally, people would think he's a typical pretty boy but Seung appears to be someone who yearns to be unique so he usually goes for the weird haircuts/clothes/accessories/etc. Remember the layered bowl cut he's got during Bad girl? It was his idea all along lol It's like "weird" for Hyunseung and 'wild" for Junhyung :") What a perfect pairing lol
Yeah, I somehow get what you mean. Like you can lessen a bit of descriptive writing but then again, you still have to include it, make it visible cuz after all, it's what distinguishes you from other fiction authors. So you have to keep it! Just that it's true that a oneshot will allow you to write more like that. Personally, I focus more on the storyline in a multi-chap but when I read a oneshot, the style of wording is what I care more about.
Ahhh, to think that this will end soon *sighs* I just re-read this fiction from the 1st chapter to this chapter and I've realized I really really like it. Hope that after it ends, I can expect more from you :")
the weird and the wild :D it's truly a gorgeous pairing hahah. and Seungie is very unique...the first time i saw his haircut (bad girl days) i was like "omgosh. i want hair like that!" ;_____; and i still do :D
Yeah, I somehow get what you mean. Like you can lessen a bit of descriptive writing but then again, you still have to include it, make it visible cuz after all, it's what distinguishes you from other fiction authors. So you have to keep it! Just that it's true that a oneshot will allow you to write more like that. Personally, I focus more on the storyline in a multi-chap but when I read a oneshot, the style of wording is what I care more about.
there was no other way.i had to quote it because you took the words right out of my mouth. your words describe my opinion even better than mine would have ever succeeded♥
and you don't know how happy it makes me that you really like this fic. i am doing my best to give it a memorable ending and hopefully i will succeed. :D <333
Hope that after it ends, I can expect more from you :") judging by our boys's decision to drive me insane with their new looks and moves and such...i doubt anybody could escape more fics written by my hand. :D i really hope you will enjoy those just as much ♥
Anyway, as I said before, this was a lovely piece of writing to read in the morning (why is it that I always get to read your fiction in the morning? lol). The thought of shy Hyunseung alone could keep me smiling for a long while because he is just THAT cute. But what I love most about this chapter is that you let a sly but so helplessly in love Junhyung lead the doe-eyed to said condition that he was caught in.
Wording wise, this update did not impress me as much as the other chapters did in the past BUT somehow, the flow of the story felt more real (partly because it was told in a simpler way w/o too much abstract things involved) and easier to catch up with! Call me a freak but I could not avoid talking to myself at some point when I 1st read this. Like "Yeah, Junhyung, JUST TAKE HIM ALREADY!" .Well, now that is a bad expamle LOL
There are quite a number of JunSeung fanfictions out there. And I'm so happy that most of them have their own styles! Still, yours and par_no_more's are among the most outstanding ones :)
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back to our business though.yes,i decided to let go of the abstract and descriptive matters and focus more on the action since it's a chaptered fic. when i'll write oneshots i shall probably let myself go wild :D
i am really glad you found this lovely and also Call me a freak but I could not avoid talking to myself at some point when I 1st read this. Like "Yeah, Junhyung, JUST TAKE HIM ALREADY!"
no worries,if that makes you a freak we all are :D i promise i shall deliver the smut very soon :) it will be worth it,i promise ;D though since i'm more of a fan of abstract descriptions...oh nvm,you will see :D
There are quite a number of JunSeung fanfictions out there. And I'm so happy that most of them have their own styles! Still, yours and par_no_more's are among the most outstanding ones :)
that's like ...a wonderful compliment,thank you :D i will still try to improve as much as possible,what you said really gave the ambition to do better,thank you ^^
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Anyway, I've pretty much figured out that it will be better for a multi-chap if it isnt worded too descriptively too. Cuz as much as I appreciate detailed writing, I find it quite a headache when there's too much of it in a long fiction T_T So glad that you share the same view :)
Ahh, glad you take my compliment as some sort of motivation B) Hope this means i can get the smut soon *bricked* Whether there will be juicy smut in the next chapter or not, I'm sure looking forward to it xD
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It just suits him a lot lot lot :x
also,i dunno... i like Hyunseung's hair too! bby's edgy much :D
Yes,we share the same opinion on the matter,i just realized it too. I shall still use my typical ways of describing but less ...well you understand ,right? i need to write a oneshot soon. It would be a challenge for me actually :x
hahah,no worries. even if i don't post smut in the next chapter ,i finished the last one so...you will probably have them both in the same day...or one day apart :)
thank you for looking forward to it hahah.your comments are one of the things that keep me 'wired',so to speak^^
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Yeah, I somehow get what you mean. Like you can lessen a bit of descriptive writing but then again, you still have to include it, make it visible cuz after all, it's what distinguishes you from other fiction authors. So you have to keep it! Just that it's true that a oneshot will allow you to write more like that. Personally, I focus more on the storyline in a multi-chap but when I read a oneshot, the style of wording is what I care more about.
Ahhh, to think that this will end soon *sighs* I just re-read this fiction from the 1st chapter to this chapter and I've realized I really really like it. Hope that after it ends, I can expect more from you :")
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and Seungie is very unique...the first time i saw his haircut (bad girl days) i was like "omgosh. i want hair like that!" ;_____; and i still do :D
Yeah, I somehow get what you mean. Like you can lessen a bit of descriptive writing but then again, you still have to include it, make it visible cuz after all, it's what distinguishes you from other fiction authors. So you have to keep it! Just that it's true that a oneshot will allow you to write more like that. Personally, I focus more on the storyline in a multi-chap but when I read a oneshot, the style of wording is what I care more about.
there was no other way.i had to quote it because you took the words right out of my mouth. your words describe my opinion even better than mine would have ever succeeded♥
and you don't know how happy it makes me that you really like this fic. i am doing my best to give it a memorable ending and hopefully i will succeed. :D <333
Hope that after it ends, I can expect more from you :")
judging by our boys's decision to drive me insane with their new looks and moves and such...i doubt anybody could escape more fics written by my hand. :D i really hope you will enjoy those just as much ♥
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