➜ 011; snowflakes

[wanbyeokhan]

Title: Snowflakes
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Rating: PG-13 (possible trigger warning)
Summary: Your face is pale, your body's cold.

Comments

[sluthyun]

stop omg just

stop

what the. hell.

i think i kind of screamed when i saw you posted something because i really, really like your works ;__; i was so mesmerized the whole time as i was reading, everything was so prettily written and their actions kind of like, lingered. my mind was just blank and it was like a little fairytale with how you described everything. i loved the paragraph about jonghyun smoking, especially this part: He liked the way Jonghyun slightly narrowed his eyes and frowned whenever he took a drag. the image in my head is so CLEAR AND VIVID I CAN ACTUALLY IMAGINE HIM DOING THAT and it's really satisfying. and it sounds super hot.

really, really good job i loved it ;__; the ending IS JUST MAKING ME WANT TO RIP MY HAIR OUT WHAT EVEN. brilliant in a very cruel, cruel way. i love these kind of endings, unexpected and making you want to scream your head off, but great nonetheless, it gives you some kind of kick idk. it's really cruel but i love it.

thanks for writing this i hope you'll write more in the future ;_; <

[sluthyun]

also, the fact that jonghyun doesn't return kibum's feelings here just makes it even more HARD TO DEAL WITH THE ENDING. i'm going to cry help

[sakay]

^ i feel the same feels.

[wanbyeokhan]

I might have a tiny smoking fetish

I'm really glad to hear that babe, thank you! ♥ I was going for creating some vivid images and I'm glad it worked out that way -- but I'm sorry I made your heart ache please don't cry!!

I will ;u; I've missed writing and since both my life and my mind are allowing me to do it again, I will.

[sakay]

wow. i just - what are my feels doing right now.

i really, really felt sad for kibum reading this. i really hate reading fics when kibum hurts, because it hurts me and i wanna cry because i'm super delicate to sad fics. but this was written beautifully, despite the sad mood of the entire thing.

[wanbyeokhan]

I felt sad writing this orz. But thank you so much ♥

[brokenplayback]

You make me tear up the first thing on saturday morning, and you didn't even save me a spot...!!!!!

[wanbyeokhan]

I honestly did not know you were still using LJ!

[hyeongsoap]

dammit. my heart this early in the morning and my eyes and wow you surely know how to twist words in a pretty and cruel way and the fact snow and cigarettes are included feels like acid on a burned skin. but of course, i'm kind of masochistic and i loved every sentence and word and

“You're just afraid of being rejected.”

“I don't want you to die.”

“You don't want to be left alone.”

“I won't be alone.”

.................

[wanbyeokhan]

Thank you, dear ♥ I've always liked snow sceneries and I thought this one suited it~
I'm slightly sorry though haha ;~;

[hyeongsoap]

there is absolutely no space to be sorry though! not at all, you have ruined me in the best possible way and i think it's nice when you achieve that. i'll just dramatically stare out of the window and wait for the snow or something. it did suit it ^^

[wanbyeokhan]

Then.. I will take that as a compliment! haha. I can't wait for the snow to come, especially when the holidays are rolling around.

[princessliette]

Oh..i love the ending D: it's perfect.. ugh

though it would be bad for me because it makes me want to have such an ending in my life..

with Jonghyun in it xDDD

thanks for sharing this wonderful fic <3 please, keep writing ^^ <3

[wanbyeokhan]

I really, really do hope I haven't triggered anything! I put a warning up there because of that ;;
Thank you so much dear ♥