Comments | waltzmatildah: fic: that long forgotten feeling of her... (Jesse and Mr. White)

waltzmatildah

fic: that long forgotten feeling of her... (Jesse and Mr. White)

Jul 18, 2010 22:32

Title: That long forgotten feeling of her...
Fandom: Breaking Bad (aka, my current meth crack...)
Characters: Jesse and Mr. White... (because it's Jesse's pov)
Word Count: 1300
Rating: R for language.
Summary: An attempt to recreate in prose the dream-like feel of the desert that is so eloquently portrayed on the screen... Just Jesse and Walt and a ( Read more... )

television: breaking bad, character: bb: jesse, character: bb: walt, fic: one shot

Comments 22

miss_blanche July 19 2010, 00:33:35 UTC

I've watched like, two episodes of this show, but I figured I knew enough to read. Seriously glad I did, the descriptions you use... Totally beautiful and heart breaking. You did just what you said you wanted to do in your summary and it was fantastic ♥ And I find myself wanting to watch more episodes of this show instead of ficcing, again, lol.

waltzmatildah July 23 2010, 07:21:56 UTC

Thank you! Sorry it's taken me sooo long to say that, I am a terrible responder lately.

I'm glad you think that it worked and that I achieved what I hoped to with it. You should DEFINITELY WATCH MOARRR!!!!

(and then write fic!)

fakepoptart July 20 2010, 20:47:30 UTC

Ahh god this is insanely awesome. The imagery is stellar and you nailed the Jesse perspective. Makes me want to write some more BB fic. And for you to do the same. Lol~

waltzmatildah July 23 2010, 07:22:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!! And you should DEFINITELY write some fic. There is SO NOT ENOUGH OF IT!!!

fakepoptart July 23 2010, 17:56:32 UTC

No problem :) I definitely agree with you about the lack of fic- It's sad. DX I wrote a one-shot just yesterday, actually! It's in my journal with the rest of my one-shots if you're interested!

vegarin August 13 2010, 04:31:40 UTC

Ouch, it's so desolating, but in a good way. I love the visceral feel to the entire piece.

Your next one should be all about grins and giggles and everything good and sweet, yes? :P

waltzmatildah August 13 2010, 10:29:39 UTC

Thank you! And you know what? I love it when people say 'ouch' in their reviews of my fic, because 99 times out of 100 that's exactly what I'm going for!

This was my first Breaking Bad fic but typically I'm holed up in Grey's Anatomy land and over there I'm kinda known for my angsting around! Grins and giggles? Not so much! But I'll try!

You know what? Once someone asked me to write them a fluffy kinda piece and in the end I had people sorting coke off each other and generally being all screwed up and crazy. I don't even know how it happens most of the time!!!

rorylie August 30 2010, 01:46:13 UTC

So I finally got caught up on the show (well...to a point, I just finished Season 2 and...I guess I'm waiting for season 3 to be released) and my first act was to read this.

And wow.

How do you do this? I hope you know like, half of how amazing you are.

Because you are.

And this is beautiful and achy and broken and perfect.

waltzmatildah August 30 2010, 06:10:20 UTC

I'm also waiting for the release of season three (and not very patiently I might add!).

Thanks for coming back to this fic and I'm so glad that you liked it!!! Also, thanks for the awesome stuff you said, I really do appreciate it!

Thank you, thank you!

sinloi November 10 2010, 03:34:24 UTC

I'm making a master list of all the Breaking Bad fan fiction there is, and I was wondering if you would mind your story being rec'd on it?

waltzmatildah November 10 2010, 03:42:21 UTC

Yeah, for sure. Go ahead.

A masterlist is a great idea.

sinloi November 10 2010, 04:12:50 UTC

Thanks! Here's a link if you wanna check it out.