[breaking bad] fic | A Matter of Time

May 28, 2013 11:06

Title | A Matter of Time
Fandom | Breaking Bad
Characters | Skyler White + Jesse Pinkman
Word Count | 650
Rating | R [violence]
Warning | CHARACTER DEATH
Written For | bellonablack

The beautiful dependency of the aftermath… )

television: breaking bad, character: bb: jesse, fic: prompt me, fic: one shot, character: bb: skyler

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waltzmatildah May 28 2013, 07:31:41 UTC
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I got catteo to read this through for me first because I was a bit worried that it was too much, you know? Also, for some reason I had you mixed up with another prompter and didn't realise it was you (I thought the prompter was someone I didn't know) so I was worried I'd freak them out! Then I re-checked the post and realised it was you and felt much more comfortable about the whole thing!

I like that she can look at the body and Jesse can't. I feel like Skyler would ~need to look. That she'd need to know, whereas Jesse's MO is (for the most part) avoidance. SO YAY! I am super glad that distinction worked!!

I like, even, how she was a Walt substitute and she kind of fit the role in a mixed way. YES! THIS! Because there ~are so many similarities between Walt and Skyler and Jesse may come up with good ideas every now and then (magnets!), but he still needs help to carry them out. He still needs Walt. Or Mike. Or the illusion of Gus. Jesse has minus amounts of self-confidence and him transferring his reliance to Skyler was definitely intentional.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR RESPONSE! I find this show terrifying to write, so, seriously, THANK YOU!!

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bellonablack May 28 2013, 18:56:19 UTC
The thing is:) I requested this from you because I knew you would do this right!<3 I mean the characters are intimidating and you would have to respect them a lot to get these two right --Which Happened!! :)

Skyler would need to know (a driving force for her) and Double Yes to avoidance being played out to the point you used it.

And that you used the Walt-Skyler similarities!!! <3 and didn't pull punches with who Jesse is.

I was excited to see you offer on the meme because I've wanted a good Skyler-Jesse fic dynamic and I knew you would be the person to ask :)z

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