[tdv] fic | Those Imaginary Lines (Elena/Katherine/Damon/Stefan)

Nov 21, 2011 00:33

Title: Those Imaginary Lines
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Characters: Elena/(Katherine/Damon/Stefan)
Word Count: 800
Rating: M
Prompt: We must be careful about what we pretend to be... from wigbee71583

We are what we pretend to be... )

character: tvd: damon, character: tvd: katherine, television: the vampire diaries, character: tvd: elena, character: tvd: stefan, character: tvd: rebekah, fic: drabble, fic: prompt me

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swirlsofblue November 20 2011, 16:18:29 UTC
This is awesome, I loved the duality of Elena feeling the outsider and yet knowing she won't ever be refused.

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waltzmatildah November 21 2011, 04:02:10 UTC
Thank you!!

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catteo November 20 2011, 17:16:54 UTC
Oh, my heart. Which is now broken into billions of teeny tiny little pieces. I think that I may just have run out of superlatives for this. Everything about it is beautiful. I love the imagery of Elena being alone even though they're always there, and the way that D/S/K are a perfect triangle and she just feels like the extra part. The parallels you draw between her and Kat are so truthy.

PS. I had a lump in my throat at the end. NO LIE.

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waltzmatildah November 21 2011, 04:06:21 UTC
Thank you! I know the show makes it seem like the D/K/S connection is nothing more than a blip on the radar but, I refuse steadfastly to believe that! And I guess, I also refuse to believe Elena could ever hope to be 'happy' and 'settled' in a normal life/relationship either from this point. So yeah, while I don't want her turned on the show any time soon (or, perhaps, ever!), I do like exploring the options in fic (it's much easier to take back here!).

Anyway, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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catteo November 22 2011, 05:23:06 UTC
Clearly the show is lying to us. D/K/S is not that insignificant. How could it be when one of them spent 145 years searching, and the other dates her doppelganger. WHATEVER, SHOW.

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brokenbell November 20 2011, 21:09:28 UTC
Utterly fabulous. You slay me!

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waltzmatildah November 21 2011, 04:06:44 UTC
Why thank you so much!

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ovariesofsteel November 21 2011, 04:31:02 UTC
I kept sneaking off the floor to re-read this today. Shhhh...don't tell my patients!

They don't notice when she disappears, but then, they don't notice when she's standing right there, either.

Right there, you caught my attention. I wasn't sure, considering your aversion to SEXY TIMES! where this would go, but here is where I decided I didn't care.

Damon is too busy watching Katherine, whose liquid gaze never wanders further than Stefan's periphery, to notice that his brother's attention is all his to hold. She feels little more than a spectator to their equilateral triangle.

THIS. EVERYTHING ABOUT IT. Gah. GAH. a;lsdkfj;alsdkjfal;sdkfjadls;k

little slice of morbid domesticity.

One of these things is not like the other, which is exactly why it is well-stated and just so them.

sweat slick thighs cramping with the desperate effort to keep up with them.

WTF? Who ARE you? (I like it).

Katherine simply takes what she wants without bothering to ask first.

Of course she does.

Damon does the grocery shopping.Moar of this please ( ... )

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waltzmatildah November 21 2011, 10:25:14 UTC
I'm pretty sure this is my favourite review ever.

As in. EVER.

Anyway...

YES! I am usually scared of the sexy tiems, I know. I am made of smut!fail. I'm glad you think it worked here!! I am trying to improve in that regard!

I AM SORRY I BROKE YOU! AND CLEARLY THOSE THINGS YOU NEED ARE THINGS THE WHOLE WORLD NEEDS!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for loving this so much! And for GETTING it, if you know what I mean. And for sneaking off from work to read it over and over and over!! I ♥ you!

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ovariesofsteel November 22 2011, 00:07:38 UTC
You're welcome :)

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x5vale November 21 2011, 10:19:47 UTC
Looks like I can't stop reading your TVD fics.

I loved how you described Elena's feelings and the parallel between her and katherine.

I think there's much more between Kath/Stefan/Damon than the show gives us and you fill that hole perfectly.

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waltzmatildah November 21 2011, 10:22:12 UTC
I think there's much more between Kath/Stefan/Damon than the show gives us ME TOO!! SO MUCH ME TOO! I mean, there HAS to be...! Surely!

And thank you! I'm glad you liked this!

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