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Fic: for the touch of the younger kind

Feb 09, 2010 16:55

Title: for the touch of the younger kind
Author: waltzforanight
Fandom: Californication
Pairing: Lew/Mia
Word Count: 2,819 words
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Lew finds it impossible to resist women, especially ones that are as young, beautiful and limber as Mia is. Especially when he's been told he can't have them.
Warnings: Underage (Mia is 16/17, Lew is so very ( Read more... )

fic by me

Comments 21

snoopypez February 9 2010, 22:00:10 UTC

OMG CAN'T READ YET BUT EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LEW HI WRITE STUFF FOR ME NEXT ;D

waltzforanight February 10 2010, 00:02:12 UTC

LEEEEEEEEEEEEEW. :D

I AM WRITING YOURS ALSO BUT I ALSO LIKE FIVE OTHER THINGS AND WHO KNOWS. BUT IT IS IN PROGRESS?

surya74 February 9 2010, 22:29:48 UTC

I LOVE THIS. Lew fic, finally! There are not enough (none?) around.

She likes to talk a lot, though, so mostly he just tunes her out. He doesn't need to pay attention to the actual words to hear sounds: short pants of breath, the slight noise as his fingers slide through her wetness, and the slip of her hands on the leather seat as her grip falters when she comes. It's her song for him.
Awesome!

Lew's got an itch (that part's not literal either, he got that situation cleared up a few weeks ago)
Hehe.

waltzforanight February 10 2010, 00:03:09 UTC

Thank you!

There really is a bizarre shortage of Lew-fic. I'm not sure I've ever read any, but I'd expect there to be a lot more considering how inherently slashy he is with Hank. :D

idreamedmusic February 9 2010, 23:55:10 UTC

Ooooh, this was great! The world needs more Lew!fics!

I so totally dislike and like Mia from the show at the same time and it's making my head spin and you managed to capture that. Because she's playing at being all grown up but isn't really. And you so totally captured Lew.

Seriously, I still think that was one of his best roles.

waltzforanight February 10 2010, 00:04:22 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

I still think that was one of his best roles.
Oh, I totally agree. That whole role fills me with GLEE, and parts like that - that's why Callum is my favouritest. :D

idreamedmusic February 10 2010, 19:01:18 UTC

That whole role fills me with GLEE, and parts like that - that's why Callum is my favouritest. :D

YES! I can watch it again and again and it will never be not amusing. And sad at the end. *sniffles*

mamaffy February 10 2010, 01:27:51 UTC

That was greatness. Seriously, thanks for bringing them alive again, I miss Lew so much. You had so many sentences that made me squee. Just a few examples:

Lew tries to look annoyed, but it doesn't get him anywhere.

but Lew thinks subtle is overrated

giving him directions even though he doesn't need them because he's been getting girls off longer than she's been alive - and then some. She likes to talk a lot, though, so mostly he just tunes her out

He watches - because he's spent, but he's not an idiot.

It's true, the world needs more Lew fic!! \w/

waltzforanight February 19 2010, 02:26:29 UTC

Delayed reply, but thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. :D

And yes, the world needs more Lew!fic. I really am surprised there isn't more out there - he's so fun.

malnpudl February 10 2010, 04:31:05 UTC

I'm with everyone else -- your characterization is just impeccable. Wow. So real, so fucked up, so outrageously hot, and touching in all the ways that neither of them would want or acknowledge. Awesome.

waltzforanight February 19 2010, 02:27:07 UTC

Thank you so much, Mal! ♥ ♥

(Ha, I'm behind at replying to comments, too. /o\)