Fic-Nobuta wo Produce

[walkwithheroes]

I had to split this up into two parts, because it's so darn long.

Title: Separately, Together- Part 2
Author: 
Rated: It's no worse than what you'd see on tv
Word Count: 4,238 (14 pages)
Summary: Some key moments in the relationship of Akira and Nobuta, post high school. 
Disclaimer: If I owned it, why would I write fan fiction about it? 
Notes: I had no

Comments

[kitsune714]

[walkwithheroes]

I think there was a point where you reduced me to near-tears, and I mean that in the best possible way.

Sorry about that. But, thank you for saying so. I'm just happy that my story had that kind of effect on someone.

This was such a lovely story and I really liked how you structured the entire tale, breaking the series of events into separate, tight little chunks.

:) Again, thank you. I love writing stories in little 'event chunks', because I think it makes everything tighter and it also lets the reader imagine what happens between Chunk A that leads to Chunk B.

, but it also did such a great job of showcasing Akira's mindset, which I think can be so challenging.

Akira's mindset was a little hard to work through. He has to mature, but he's Akira, so he'll be a bit silly and make mistakes. Don't even get me started on writing Nobuta. Now, she can be hard to write as she's so quite, but she says so much through her movements and expressions.

Again, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading.

[animefreak42]

Just... guh. Oh, Akira. Oh, Nobuta. Oh, Mariko and Shuji getting married and Akira messing everything up and oh, Nobuta! This was amazing, people definitely need to write more Akira/Nobuta fic. <3 Thank you.

[walkwithheroes]

:) Yes, people do need to write more Akira/Nobuta fic. They need to write more fic for this series in general. Maybe I'll write something else for these characters...soon.

And, thank you for reading.

[mellowdee]

SIGH. LOVE. I FORGIVE YOU FOR THE SADNESS FROM PART 1. Because Akira and Nobuta should always just BE Akira and Nobuta. THIS IS WONDERFUL. I don't think I can say it enough.

[walkwithheroes]

I FORGIVE YOU FOR THE SADNESS FROM PART 1.

Thank you. But, you know...you have to have the sad, before you can get to the happy.

Because Akira and Nobuta should always just BE Akira and Nobuta.

Yes, they should. They can get older and mature a little. They can learn about the world. They can even grow up. BUT, they should stay Akira and Nobuta...because they're just happier that way.

Thanks for reading!

[partypaprika]

I was linked here by kitsune714 and I really really really (x a million) liked your story. The format, the repetition, the rhythm--it made each segment so poignant. After the first part of the story, I thought it ended and wanted to weep at the insanely good angst. But then, the second part was even better and made me want to cry as well. Thank you for posting it, because it was such a joy to read!

[walkwithheroes]

KITSUNE714 linked to my story? Very cool.

I really really really (x a million) liked your story. The format, the repetition, the rhythm--it made each segment so poignant.

Thank you very much! I was unsure about the story, so it's great to hear that so many have enjoyed it.

After the first part of the story, I thought it ended and wanted to weep at the insanely good angst. But then, the second part was even better and made me want to cry as well.

I adore angst. Angst and fluff. So, I tend to write something angsty, but throw in a bit of hope/happiness at the end. Again, I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for reading!

kawaii!

[colorful_blade]

~~and just so sad! It was very fluffy, and you can make it fluffy so that it's sweet but not unbearable ^_^ which is something I have yet to master...pretty!

Re: kawaii!

[walkwithheroes]

Thanks for reading. I'm happy to hear that it wasn't too fluffy. :)

BTW: Love the icon!