"Foul-Weather Friend", Chapter 11, Part 2

[waking_epiphany]

Title: Foul-Weather Friend
Author: waking_epiphany (Jamie)
Rating: HARD R (NOTE THE RATING CHANGE), for language and sexy situations
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me; they belong to J.J. Abrams and Bad Robot.
Pairings: Sark/Sydney, implied past Sydney/Vaughn, implied past Sark/Lauren, implied past Sark/Alison.
Timeline:

Comments

Yes! Mwahahahahaha!

[agentonyx]

I nearly yelped when I saw this update. Bad case of insomnia turns into happy joy fun-time for me!

First off, WoW? Do you play World of Warcraft? Hee hee, I do. Just finished a raid earlier last night. Marshall playing is definitely NOT a stretch. /lol

Very interesting, this whole 'sickness' debacle. I especially like how you didn't just blame every bad thing Sark has done on it. He's a killer but now on top of it he's doing dirty work against his will ...which bothers him. Perhaps because he has rationalized other deeds as being 'just business' or 'how the game is played'. That's how I've viewed him on the show.

Whew! That last bit is brilliant. Not to say I've read a lot of fictional sex scenes but I have. From fanfic to J.D. Robb's In Death series.
Your Sark and Sydney romp was lovely and very tastefully done. I was smiling all the way through just happy that they came together so wonderfully. Sark's full smile during one of their kisses was absolutely endearing. I love it when Sark gets what he wants. Plus, I have to say this is the best example of Sydney/Sark "making love" that I've read. This is how it should have been. The little bits of dialog were perfect, too.
I commend you ...Woot!

Re: Yes! Mwahahahahaha!

[waking_epiphany]

I DO play WoW! I have a lvl 26 blood elf mage and a lvl 65 drenaei priest, but I'm still not any good. You KNOW Marshall would be all over that!

I was so nervous about writing/posting the sex scene so I'm very glad you found it tasteful and in characteer. I didn't want to throw them in bed and be like "THEY'RE IN LOVE NOW" or it be super angry sex, so...yes. Sex is good :-)

As always, thank you so much for taking the time out to comment. It really makes my whole day! Week! Month!