A very belated New Year's Eve-themed 221B drabble. I'm dedicating this to
write_out because she's had a crap week.
Title: Setting the Tone (pt 1)
Fandom: Sherlock (AU, Bone-Fiddle-verse)
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Summary: Once again, John teaches Sherlock to have a little respect for tradition.
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Setting the Tone )
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"Sherlock stood at the bottom wearing that venomous expression he got when he was personally offended by someone’s stupidity.
I love this description so much. It's perfect. Sherlock is perfect. John ignoring Sherlock's whine is perfect. This entire fic is perfect. Thank you so, so much for another story in this most amazing verse! What a way to make a shit week better! Now I can go off to bed and fall asleep thinking about what (who) comes next.
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(There's more, ahem, coming. The rating on that drabble collection at AO3 isn't E right now. It will be. :D)
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I thought I was subscribed to the drabble collection, but I wasn't. Horrors! I just fixed that!
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I haven't added this one there yet. I'm waiting for the other parts.
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We always struggle a little bit with how much to write the accent out. Laying it on too thick is just horrible, but we want to make sure the reader can "hear" it. (For those characters who have it, that is. Sherlock and Mycroft don't - they speak like the moderately wealthy, well-connected Central/Northern Virginians they actually are.)
It's very difficult to convey, without outright stating, for example, that Sherlock and John do not pronounce "Appalachian" the same way. :)
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John, who grew up there, would say it "App-a-latch-ia." Short a in the third syllable. Rhymes with patch, snatch, catch, and Cumberbatch.
Though Sherlock has probably noticed this and done a little correcting on it. He can mimic the accent when he has to. Going native, one syllable and one rednecky habit at a time.
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I don't know anything about Google Docs, but I was once told that OO counts correctly while MS Word counts part, determines the average number of words per line and then multiplies that with the number of lines. Hence probably 221B, yes!
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Oh, that's interesting about OO and Word. Yet another reason why Word can't be trusted. OK, I'm going to go with what OO says from now on then. Thanks!
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As far as word count, I've had google docs tell me it was 221 words but AO3 not register all the words? Or something
Bah
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I'm not bothered about word counts except when it REALLY matters. As in drabbles, goddammit!
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