Bone Fiddle-verse 221B: "Setting the Tone" (part 1)

Jan 18, 2015 21:05

A very belated New Year's Eve-themed 221B drabble. I'm dedicating this to write_out because she's had a crap week.

Title: Setting the Tone (pt 1)
Fandom: Sherlock (AU, Bone-Fiddle-verse)
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Summary: Once again, John teaches Sherlock to have a little respect for tradition.

Setting the Tone )

my fic, drabbles, the bone fiddle, au, slash, sherlock

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justgotone January 19 2015, 03:18:00 UTC
Damn. All I did at midnight was eat 12 grapes.

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vulgarweed January 19 2015, 03:29:46 UTC
That's a good one too! Wishing you a joyous and healthy and wealthy New Year.

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justgotone January 19 2015, 03:36:28 UTC
Back atcha! Especially wealthy. :)

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write_out January 19 2015, 03:43:15 UTC
OHHHHHHHHH. You are fucking fantastic!! Thank you!!

"Sherlock stood at the bottom wearing that venomous expression he got when he was personally offended by someone’s stupidity.

I love this description so much. It's perfect. Sherlock is perfect. John ignoring Sherlock's whine is perfect. This entire fic is perfect. Thank you so, so much for another story in this most amazing verse! What a way to make a shit week better! Now I can go off to bed and fall asleep thinking about what (who) comes next.

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vulgarweed January 19 2015, 06:27:40 UTC
Thank YOU so much, and you're welcome! I am SO GLAD you enjoyed it so much, yay! <3

(There's more, ahem, coming. The rating on that drabble collection at AO3 isn't E right now. It will be. :D)

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write_out January 19 2015, 14:05:43 UTC
I enjoyed it SO much! Seriously. Thank you again!

I thought I was subscribed to the drabble collection, but I wasn't. Horrors! I just fixed that!

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vulgarweed January 20 2015, 01:19:22 UTC
My pleasure!

I haven't added this one there yet. I'm waiting for the other parts.

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azriona January 19 2015, 11:23:07 UTC
Love it! John's accent just tickles me pink. :)

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vulgarweed January 20 2015, 00:56:50 UTC
Thank you!

We always struggle a little bit with how much to write the accent out. Laying it on too thick is just horrible, but we want to make sure the reader can "hear" it. (For those characters who have it, that is. Sherlock and Mycroft don't - they speak like the moderately wealthy, well-connected Central/Northern Virginians they actually are.)

It's very difficult to convey, without outright stating, for example, that Sherlock and John do not pronounce "Appalachian" the same way. :)

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azriona January 20 2015, 01:35:25 UTC
How do they pronounce it, then?

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vulgarweed January 20 2015, 02:02:01 UTC
Sherlock, like most outsiders, would say it "App-a-laytch-ia". 3rd syllable has a long A, doesn't rhyme with much except the letter h (aitch!).

John, who grew up there, would say it "App-a-latch-ia." Short a in the third syllable. Rhymes with patch, snatch, catch, and Cumberbatch.

Though Sherlock has probably noticed this and done a little correcting on it. He can mimic the accent when he has to. Going native, one syllable and one rednecky habit at a time.

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_silverfox January 19 2015, 14:02:33 UTC
So most of the world will spend all year watching fireworks then? ;)

I don't know anything about Google Docs, but I was once told that OO counts correctly while MS Word counts part, determines the average number of words per line and then multiplies that with the number of lines. Hence probably 221B, yes!

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vulgarweed January 20 2015, 00:54:20 UTC
Yes! And being very, very drunk.

Oh, that's interesting about OO and Word. Yet another reason why Word can't be trusted. OK, I'm going to go with what OO says from now on then. Thanks!

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demonicsymphony January 20 2015, 21:03:05 UTC
AHHHH GORGEOUS

As far as word count, I've had google docs tell me it was 221 words but AO3 not register all the words? Or something

Bah

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vulgarweed January 21 2015, 05:27:48 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

I'm not bothered about word counts except when it REALLY matters. As in drabbles, goddammit!

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