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voxfuriae

ATtD Ch 55 pt 2

Oct 21, 2006 05:12

Last request?

“Yeah, something like that.” Draco rolled his eyes at the sadistic smirk he was already growing used to. “Out of curiosity, how much of that act was him? Those memories, the shit you said; you played me like a fucking fiddle, some of it must have been him.” He had totally played him, so much so that Draco had almost lost any ( Read more... )

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grey_hunter October 23 2006, 15:45:15 UTC

It is really confusing, reading this fic in little parts. I didn't remember who this Nox thingy was at first. :D Now I know he is a megalomaniac perv with a repressed sexuality and an unhealthy obsession for the dangerous kind of boys. LOL I hope Harry wakes up soon and anchors the story to reality with his simplistic mindset. That would be a relief. But I'm not complaining, actually. Looking forward to the next.
Btw, you have some really weird... I shall call them 'typos' inside the text. For example, once you said 'messaging' instead of 'massaging' and that made me snicker, but also broke the flow.

voxfuriae October 23 2006, 19:09:03 UTC

Yes, yes, not only is Nox Amor a megalomaniac perv, but he's also Paris Hilton messaging during sex! Fucking hell! *rolls eyes and then kicks computer* sigh. =_= Stupid spell check. Word didn't even pick that up, I didn't even pick that up when reading it... bugger. *fixes* Thanks for your help, luv. *huggles* Yeah, Noxy is a tad crazy, the poor baby. But remember, he was pretending to be Harry in the beggining so some of that shit was sort of in character for a horny Harry. XD

grey_hunter October 24 2006, 06:56:58 UTC

LOL I know what you mean. It's really not something a Word spell check would pick up. I do it all the time, too. Perhaps you could find a beta. Not because you need it that much, it's just stupid mistakes like this.

Actually, I suspect everyone who had to live forever and remember that life would go crazy with the endless possibilities. Though one would suspect that only human beings designed to a human lifetime would go bonkers if that lifetime got suddenly stretched to the infinite. Do you think this means your (and other author's) gods were initially mortals? Or the other theory is that they aren't really crazy, it's just people thinking they are. If they were, some of them surely would have thought of creating/siring a psycho-analist god, ne? :D

voxfuriae October 29 2006, 00:36:27 UTC

Actually, that's a good point and one relevant in the story. Furiae is designed in a way that he can live for eternity without fear of losing his mind. In essence he has come into creation in a way that will always be supportive of the universe, so he can't be an unstable being. The irony of course is, Light is also a stable being, but not in the same way as Furiae is. So, for the majority of Light's children, they are stable in a sense because they were created by beings like Light. Nox Amor doesn't fit with the other three because his attributes are from Furiae, a more advanced being. Nox Amor’s advanced emotions that he gained are actually his downfall with Light's flawed form. The other three brothers, although quite callous and mad in a human sense, are actually more stable then Nox Amor. Nox may have started out as the strongest, but his emotions at this point have caused him to be vulnerable to the pains of existence, without Furiae’s stabilizing ability, so he is wearing down and doing his best to keep himself from ( ... )

grey_hunter October 29 2006, 06:30:50 UTC

So basically, you say that N.A. is too human to be able to look upon life and death as he should, because he cannot get used to the fact that people get hurt and die. He is unstable because he has feelings, while the others regard humanity as something beneath their level of existanece and that's why they don't go mad. Except F, who has emotions but is able to see death as natural and an essential part of how the world works ( ... )

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