Comments | voxfuriae: ATtD Ch 55 pt 2

voxfuriae

ATtD Ch 55 pt 2

Oct 21, 2006 05:12

Last request?

“Yeah, something like that.” Draco rolled his eyes at the sadistic smirk he was already growing used to. “Out of curiosity, how much of that act was him? Those memories, the shit you said; you played me like a fucking fiddle, some of it must have been him.” He had totally played him, so much so that Draco had almost lost any ( Read more... )

hp, attd, h/d

Comments 26

mischiefcat October 22 2006, 01:05:41 UTC

Really good chapter. Confusing in parts, but still good.

voxfuriae October 22 2006, 05:10:10 UTC

Thankies! Hopefully things will seem less confusing later on. ^^

sophie84 October 22 2006, 03:08:45 UTC

Aside from the fact that I hadn't realized Harry and Nox Amor were distinct entities (I'd had the impression that harry was essentially Nox Amor with his memory wiped, but at least now I can understand how Nox can be in love with his brother while harry is falling for draco... sorta...) this chapter was absolutely fascinating. Turned my understanding of this world upside-down again, but I am enthralled nonetheless. Oh, you might want to search the word "lose" in this chapter, b/c there are a few points in which I think you actually mean "loss."

voxfuriae October 22 2006, 05:09:16 UTC

Thanks, hun. *fixes* I get used to seeing a certain word and don't realize that word doesn't belong there. The same with loose too. >_<

I see Harry and Nox Amor as if Harry were a split personality created because of the loss of Nox Amor's memories. Growing up with a fresh mind not tainted by pain into random circumstances, Harry can ideally be just about anything he wants, except somehow Nox Amor ends up ruining that even when asleep, first with Voldemort who is a reincarnated enemy and then with the Heir business, and as you'll later see, the leaking of his mind/memory into Harry's consciousness. As is, Nox Amor could never be stable enough to take human form... I suppose it's an ignorance is bliss sort of look at life. Anyways, I'm glad you like it; after writing this chapter I feared many an outburst about how confusing and strange it seems. @_@

sophie84 October 23 2006, 01:05:16 UTC

That was sooooooooo AWESOME! Man i cant wait for the next chapter! U sure know how to write a "page turner"! GOD I LOVE U!
Roxie

voxfuriae October 29 2006, 00:03:01 UTC

Lol, thanks hun. ^.^ Glad you like it so far.

sataldajamahel October 23 2006, 01:16:28 UTC

Insane, but in a really wonderful way. I'm so excited for the next installment.

More soon? Please? Because you love us?

voxfuriae October 24 2006, 02:46:42 UTC

Hmm... well I do love you all...

XD Eventually, I haven't been able to write recently. Just a hard couple of weeks. Thanks for the sweetness. *glomp*

sataldajamahel October 24 2006, 12:10:35 UTC

*squee!*

And we understand. Life is busy. But..when you get a chance. :D *hugs*

anonymous October 23 2006, 02:52:39 UTC

That was wonderful bliss... I love reading your story before bed, it gives me time to dream about it tho thanks to the update I ignored Chemistry and English but that's okay, I like H/D better anyway. ^^ Saa, Nox Amor si mean to poor Draco... and confusing. I feel pretty bad for Nox Amor tho bc he said he wanted to die. I really love this. Can't wait for chapter 56!

~Yo

P.S. How are your dad's ?

voxfuriae October 24 2006, 02:52:36 UTC

Lol, study, you! I was lucky in a way, that when I was in school I never really had access to the internet ergo, no mad obsession with reading fanfics (just reading in general.) Nox Amor is mean! But his brothers are meaner. O_o The poor guy has issues; he used to be nicer but life has not been easy for him. He's sort of given up >_> hopefully things will get better for him.

anonymous October 23 2006, 04:33:29 UTC

:sigh: It feels good to read your fic, honestly i've had a bad weekend and this always cheers me up no matter how horrid the happening, and speaking of bad times your having one and again i'm sure things will get better so take good care of yourself! And this is bloody brilliant, I understand it as much as i think a person could. Your writing remains amazing, I think your meant for this, to write at the least keep it as a hobby. My only question is, since it appears that Draco's vella side has had a bad experience with love in the past, or at least that's what Nox implies, when he says that the vella understands but Draco will learn, so will you be going farther in to detail about that?

voxfuriae October 24 2006, 03:09:43 UTC

I'm glad my fic could cheer you up, hun. *huggles* I hope you feel better. I'm... unhappy really; someone I cared about just died, but it's not immediate family or anything. Just kinda turned my life upside down again. It'll get better though. ^^

It is so sweet of you to say that! Gods, now that I started I don't know if I can stop the whole writing thing. It's become such an outlet for me; therapeutic and fun. <3 As for the little line about Drake's Veela... Draco's clan is, as he pointed out, mad insane. Love, especially unrequited, is very painful for them. It's not full-fledged in Lucius because his exritus wasn't as powerful, but in the other's of his Clan, things can get rather crazy, fights, jealousy, killing... Things will be getting very fun. XD It’ll be explained better later (mostly because I haven’t worked out all the details in my head yet.)