[One-Shot] Conscription
Title: Conscription
Pairing: YB/TOP
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,402
Summary: Night before Top goes to the army in the near-ish future
Author's Notes: This is on the basis of an established YB/Top relationship and Korean Military Service.
( Close Your Eyes and I'll Kiss You, Tomorrow I'll Miss You )
Pairing: YB/TOP
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,402
Summary: Night before Top goes to the army in the near-ish future
Author's Notes: This is on the basis of an established YB/Top relationship and Korean Military Service.
( Close Your Eyes and I'll Kiss You, Tomorrow I'll Miss You )
So fricking happy, soooo fricking happy!!! ahhhh!!!!!
The world lacks this so-fricking-hot-and-amazing pairing and i feel so lone but gahhh!! now I'm complete, thank you soooo much!!! (OTP right here, I R BIASED)
//fan spazz over \\rant begin
Anyways, beside the fact that this fic is NC-17 which is like my thang. cough. and beside another fact that it let me use my ToBae icon rightfully the writing is so beautiful.
The transition possess such a fluidity that one would think that it was actually a movie instead and the imagery is so poignantly vibrant that it is like watching it...as a movie.
The first part, with Bae helping shave Seunghyun's hair is just so beautiful. It have such a moment in which my eyes glazed over imagining the feeling of unease and hope and everything in the emotional spectrum. The love and the tenderness filling the room as the afternoon sunlight breaks through the window, it's hard to describe what i see when i read things but it's so deeply moving to not comment on that fact.
But then the couple would of course move into their cheeky antic, a wonderful break, with Seunghyun's naughty yet thoughtful head it is expected. I love that Bae play along and i love how caring they are. making my heart swells.
The rated part made me blush, in such a good way, they're both caring as I've mentioned yet the passion and love is still very much dominant. Not to mention, so cute!~
Sweat trickled down SeungHyun’s jawline and YoungBae lifted a hand to wipe it off. SeungHyun turned his head slightly and captured YoungBae’s thumb with his lips and sucked gently on it, rolling his tongue around the pad and following the circular motion with his hips gyrating to create a new sensation inside YoungBae and make his other hand’s fingernails dig into SeungHyun’s shoulder blades.
this evidently supports my point, so sweet and tender <33
The ending had me tearing up. But of course as this is inevitable and as that time they'd be mature-they already are, the sadness is one of more human like sadness between lovers instead of the typical bawling babies maudlin. They also possess hope and it's such a lovely thing.
Lastly, you made it a happy ending (because as i said, it is for that it was to come and they had accepted it even though they have doubts and are scared) with the joviality and sneaky cuteness fluff that had my feeling a bit of a tingling sensation in the fluff region of my brain. Cheeky ToBae had struck again.
//end rant \\ more spazz
ANYWAYS OMGOMGOMGis sitll spazzing thankyou sooooooooooooo much again you are my hero!! gawdddd <33333 plse, please for my insanity (as you can see is pretty bad)write more ToBae when you have time, I'd totally say id return the favor if i didn't suck :D
also, can i friend you? :DDD
PS. I totally will support Kim Tae Woo / YoungBae ;DDDD
PSS. But ToBae trumps all in my heart so maybe not.
PSSS. OMG OMG more spazz TOBAE NC-17!! AHHHH //end
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Actually the whole thing came to me a while ago because someone really close to me ended up going to the Korean army relatively recently. So, I'd like to think I'd understand how the couple would feel. ^^
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