You Screamed for Me Last Night (Love Letters, Theta/Koschei, NC-17)

[von_gelmini]

Title: You Screamed for Me Last Night
Series | Arc: Love Letters | None
Age | Sequence: 78 | 1
Prompt: none
Author: von_gelmini
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Theta/Koschei
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 268
Warnings: explicit sex
Disclaimer: I do not own Doctor Who. I am not writing this for profit.

Comments

[iamjabberwok]

Wow. Somehow this poem seems more intimate than any of the letters or diary entries you have created so far. I feel like I'm really eavesdropping on their relationship, seeing something I shouldn't. It feels so, so personal. I can imagine Theta receiving this and opening it so innocently in the common room. People all around. He would turn bright red, probably. And then go back to their room and ravish Koschei.

Lovely, lovely work. It feels so intimate and real.

[von_gelmini]

Thanks so much. That's what I love about letters and such... Koschei can really let himself say things he never would speak out loud.

[silvermoon_06]

Wow! This is positively gorgeous and so beautifully written. Koschei is just as much of a passionate soul as his Theta is. Theta is so lovely when he is being ravaged by his Koschei, and all his sweet pleading and and desperate whimpers for release made this even sweeter.

I could just picture the two of them together enjoying each other's bodies and pouring out their love to each other so strongly. I love the last line, where it's Koschei's turn to scream out his Theta's name. That is so poignant and really captures how attuned they are to each other. It really shows how deep their love goes for each other.

Thanks again for another magnificent update with the boys, it was absolutely brilliant. It's gone into my memories to join the others. :D

[von_gelmini]

Thanks so much. I can't thank you enough for all your encouragement & help during our chats. :)

[silvermoon_06]

Aw, bless. You're so welcome, kind sir, I'm glad to be of such wonderful assistance. :) You also give me a lot of wonderful encouragement and inspiration, for my story, during our chats too. *Hugs*

[scifiangel]

The most apt word is WOW! That was incredible.

[von_gelmini]

Oh, thanks so much. I'm tickled that you've enjoyed it. :)

[skyeblux]

Beautiful, unbelievably beautiful and so poetic. I love your writting. Thanks so much for sharing!

[von_gelmini]

Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.

[luckweaver]

Oh gorgeous, so gorgeous. <333 I'm going to have to try and write something sweet for the Master/Theta request, eh? Got myself into the Rassilon/Master request which I believe is another thing in which I am daring myself to write something new but... Okay, I'm getting carried away. I got an email from Will tonight <333333 In far too chipper a mood.

This was a fantastic poem. I don't even know what to say. Hot, intimate, and definately some of your best work :3

[von_gelmini]

Thanks. :) Glad you liked it so much. I'm looking forward to reading your A-Z prompts. Congrats on the whole relationship thing & the chipper mood :D Everyone needs some happy in their lives.