View From The Outside (oneshot)

Jun 11, 2011 03:14


Title: View From The Outside
Pairings: Jongkey, friend!Taekey
Rating: R
Genre: Angst
Word count: 4,000ish
Summary: A look at Jonghyun and Key's relationship...from a much different point of view.
A/N: This is the first fic I've written for the SHINee fandom. I'm pretty nervous about posting this, but also really excited! Enjoy.

Also, I had this song ( Read more... )

fandom:shinee, oneshot, jongkey, fic:view from the outside

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hitoshisakurai June 11 2011, 07:33:28 UTC
SPOT
I'm soooo yearning for some new fics, will read it after cleaning my room :D

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hitoshisakurai June 11 2011, 08:19:33 UTC
I... I need a sequel.
It's absolutely one of the best one-shots I've read so far.
And it's probably the first fanfic in which I truly like Taemin's personality.
It's so heart-breaking... and so realistic... and beautifully written...
♥ ♥ ♥

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voltagequeen June 11 2011, 23:32:04 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! What an awesome first comment for my first-ever shinee fic! ♥
I'm glad you liked Taemin's personality. I was worried it would come out as kind of awkward.
Once again, thank you so much!

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bree_nd June 11 2011, 08:10:46 UTC
But what did taemin say? *pouts* I wanna know~

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voltagequeen June 11 2011, 23:34:55 UTC
Sorry :'''( That's up for you to interpret! ;)

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lunathunderhead June 11 2011, 08:47:41 UTC
This was pretty awesome.

I love how you end it so open-ended (ugh, redundancy). It really lets me interpret it for myself, and...wow, I have to say, Taemin's characterization was quite commendable!

Overall, great fic.

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voltagequeen June 11 2011, 23:36:24 UTC
Thank you so much! It was my plan to leave it open-ended since I first started writing it, so I'm glad you thought it worked out nicely.

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pilipinagrl June 11 2011, 09:35:02 UTC
This was an absolutely gorgeous one-shot.

i love the characterization on Taemin here. Everything just feels so raw, breakable and i loved it. i mean, i may want a sequel but the open-endedness was well done. this was awesome!

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voltagequeen June 11 2011, 23:38:34 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm relieved that Taemin's characterization translated so well, I had been pretty nervous about it.

thanks so much!

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melalocket June 11 2011, 09:39:05 UTC
Love this >w<
poor jongkeeeyyy~

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voltagequeen June 11 2011, 23:39:33 UTC
Thanks!

Yes...those poor, poor boys. Sigh~

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