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Oct 20, 2004 12:04

so in all of my depressive anger i wrote a song...i haven't decided on the title yet but let me know what you think (HONESTLY!)

title: My heart is your playground or carving on my heart

you carve your initials on my heart
like you carve on a tree
but i know that in the end
you'll be the one who's leaving me

so cut the crap, we can end this now
you can leave and i'll cry my eyes out
you'll move on and i won't know how
my heart is not your playground!

i want to hate you so much!
but my heart deceives me
i'm gonna love you always
until my lungs stop breathing (x2)

so cut the crap, we can end this now (i wanna hate you so much!)
you can leave and i'll cry my eyes out
you'll move on and i won't know how (i'm gonna love you always!)
my heart is not your playground! (repeat to fade)

i think it needs another verse between the chorus and the last part...idk, let me know if i should add something!

p.s.> this song is not about anyone...so don't think it is. i came up with the first verse and thought it was good so i kept rolling with it. that is all.
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