when we met light was shed [twilight; jacob/bella; r]

[voiture_jaune]

when we met light was shed. by voiture_jaune.
twilight. jacob/bella. r. ~5500 words. Bella leaves Italy, alone. post-new moon

Comments

[bluesuzanne]

It's been a long time since I've read a fanfic I've really enjoyed. Thanks for this, it was lovely. It had such a gorgeous structure, I loved how the end harkened back to the beginning and at the same time the end was a beginning and the beginning was an end. Very nice.

Loved your Jake. Loved his list for Bella. Loved him going off to sulk and then picking flowers for her, because he's sweet, and because he's not above currying favour ;)

And this whole part...

Jake kneels in front of her, takes her face in his hands. She protests, weakly, but looks at him while he rests his forehead against hers. “Bells,” he breathes, so quiet, so reverent. It’s enough to make her heart pound, her hands shake at his sides. “You know how much I love fixing things.”

They both laugh and she pinches him in the side, leaning back, rubbing her hands over her face. Jake takes them from her, intertwines them with his. Before Bella knows what is happening, where the sky is and what color, his lips are against hers, soft and warm and finally.

Lovely <3

Hope to read more from you!

[voiture_jaune]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) And I'm particularly glad you liked Jake's character, he can be a little troublesome at times.

Thank you for commenting!