Brilliant

Jul 08, 2007 20:13

Title: Brilliant
Author: voicelikehoney
Characters: Tenth Doctor/Martha Jones; hints of Tom/Martha
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: The Last of the Time Lords
Summary: There's something the Doctor forgot to tell Martha ...

New fic. Not sure how I feel about it, tbh ... TLOTTL makes it hard to write convincing Ten/Martha nowadays.

It’s that same old torture all over again, isn’t it? The child, the old man, the genius, the fool, the ravingly beautiful egomaniac in a tailored suit and trainers. Did you ever really understand what you did to me? )

ten/martha fic

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voicelikehoney July 8 2007, 22:13:17 UTC
Just gone off to watch a couple of Life on Mars eps and came back to check my LJ with my fingers crossed ... feeling significantly comforted about this fic now. hee.

Thanks for the comment! And yeah, I kinda live vicariously through the characters I write. *cough* The Doctor may not have given Martha her full due at the end of the last episode, but that doesn't stop him being hotter than hell ...

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deisegal July 8 2007, 20:20:04 UTC
niiiiice!! She damn well is briliant :-D

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voicelikehoney July 8 2007, 22:15:54 UTC
Grinning here. I love sharing the Martha love ... particularly as I read far too many places where she's just not appreciated like she should be! I'm very glad you liked it.

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deisegal July 9 2007, 08:51:42 UTC
Reading wonderful fics like this I forget that there is a lot of anti-Martha stuff out there. Which is good!

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deisegal July 9 2007, 09:03:22 UTC
Just to clarify there, it is good that I forget about the anti Martha stuff not it is good that there is anti Martha stuff out there. ;)

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in_the_end July 8 2007, 20:30:08 UTC
That was so made of win. I absolutely loved it!

And that kiss was hawt!

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voicelikehoney July 8 2007, 22:22:19 UTC
Yay! heehee. *hugs you* Thanks, I'm so pleased you liked. Kisses are always fun to write, particularly if they're between two such pretty people ...

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evil_hobittess July 8 2007, 20:42:04 UTC
*could do with a snog like that as well*

Perfect. Probably the best (and best thought out) post-finale Ten/Martha I've read. Also, yay for Tom!

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voicelikehoney July 8 2007, 22:28:15 UTC
Ten/Martha give me sexual frustration. What can I say?

Apart from awwwww of course. And a teeny blush. hee.

Thank you, though. Really! I was worried it was rather too rambly and I reeeeally didn't want to make Martha this pathetic loser who couldn't go on without the Doctor patting her on the head, but at the same time I've felt since the finale that she deserved more than she got, whether she absolutely needed it or not. It's a hard balance to get in fic though ... you wouldn't believe the number of drafts I tore up where Martha just plain thwacked the Doctor, or got rather unnecessarily bitter and shouty at him. It took me realising that that was me being pissed at the Doctor after the finale, not Martha's voice, before I ripped those parts out.

Hopefully now she just reads as sassy, kick-arse and fantastic brilliant.

Thanks again! :-)

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malaleen July 8 2007, 20:45:51 UTC
Love you, loves the fic...

Gave me the warm fuzzies.

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voicelikehoney July 8 2007, 22:39:52 UTC
Love you

The feeling's entirely mutual. *huggles you* And I've always adored that icon. It's that look in his eyes that convinces me he's imagined kissing Martha the way I described ... though I guess I've thought that from pretty much the first moment he laid eyes on her in the hospital, and more particularly in the alleyway when he picks her up.

Ten/Martha UST burns me, it's that hot. *sigh*

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