Chapter 14: Ice, Ice, Baby (Part B)

[sarah_and_lizzy]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 109,131
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 14: ICE, ICE, BABY
Author: herowlness and sarah_p
Additional Characters: Casey, Dick, JP, Madison, Susan Knight,

Comments

S.O.R.R.Y.

[oliviamars]

I want to apologize for not leaving a comment on this particular chapter. Oh well... winter term of university is about to start in... wait... let me count... exactly 2 days and I am so lost because I'm a freshman... fresh-woman. *g*
As usual: This is the greatest VM-fanfic ever... and when I say or write EVER I mean EVER. Get this straight: I can't wait for the next chapter. Right now I'm bored and the new chapter could influence my mood dramatically... in a good way of course.
First I wanna say that it was sooooooooo cool that chapter 14 had 2 parts!!! Wheee! I was pleased like a little girl at Christmas. Do you know how it feels to wish for... let's say... an mp3-player? And on December 24 (or 25 in America) you get an iPod. That's like... wow. It's not just an mp3-player... no... it's the coolest mp3-player in the world! I love long chapters! Totally. I'm a bookworm. I confess.
The chapter itself... hmmm... it wasn't as thrilling as the last ones but I bet you have to write chapters like that to increase the whole suspense of your fic. I so want to know when Veronica will tell Logan about this dead man. Hmmm...
Wanna. Read. Chappie. Fifteen. *sigh*

Re: S.O.R.R.Y.

[sarah_p]

See, and I'M sorry for taking so long to comment back to you! But! You commented at ALL, so no matter how long it took, that makes you awesome :). It's so nice to know you're enjoying the fic! With a group project like this, there's so much coordinating that goes into it, knowing it's WORKING helps. A LOT.

First I wanna say that it was sooooooooo cool that chapter 14 had 2 parts!!! Wheee! I was pleased like a little girl at Christmas.

THIS is the best ever, because I know that sometimes people are turned off by long fics, but...we couldn't tell it in only one post! And, dude, MP3 PLAYER ANALOGIES WILL GET YOU EVERYWHERE ;).

The chapter itself... hmmm... it wasn't as thrilling as the last ones but I bet you have to write chapters like that to increase the whole suspense of your fic.

You've got it! This chapter is a little spot of fluff in the whole mystery arc...we did a little with it, but tried to go for fun and light instead of OMGDEATH. Cause, really, we all know there'll be more scary mystery stuff....might as well drag it out a little ;).

Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! :)