Chapter 6: Forgive Us Our Trespasses

[__tiana__]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 39,000 to date
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 6: Forgive Us Our Trespasses
Authors: __tiana__ and sadiekate
Additional Characters: Lamb, Luke
Rating: R for

Comments

[catteo]

Ooooh this was good. Trust you two to write the chapter with this in it:
Can I help it if Michael Rosenbaum portrays him as a complex and compelling villain, with a touch of pathos, and still looks good doing it? Donny, you should really check him out. You might pick up a few pointers, if you decide to shift away from incompetence and go the evil mastermind route. Laughing. My ass. OFF.

Thought you did a really good job of continuing the tension between Veronica and Keith. Even though they're trying to do the daddy-daughter thing it's not really happening.

I felt so sorry for Logan at the end. He just wants to know what's going on in her head. Why must she always run away from him. WHY? Yes, I am frustrated.

Great snarkage all the way through the Lamb scene. And HE WAS WEARING A JOURNEY T-SHIRT. You guys RAWK. Well done!

[__tiana__]

Oh yes. When we were brainstorming the chapter, it was most firmly decided that some kind of Lex/Rosenbaum reference was required and Kate wrote this one. Hilarious!

Glad you liked all those parts - and yes, the Journey t-shirt. Hee. THANKS!

[sadiekate]

I know that was so very self-indulgent to not only include a Rosenbaum shout-out, but also to write it very much in my own voice. Thank god Ti humors me with my nonsense.

[__tiana__]

Luckily, YOUR voice sometimes sounds like Logan's voice, so it all worked out. PLUS, I indulge, humor and otherwise do whatever you want on a regular basis. Heh.

[sadiekate]

Hee. Why do you think I write so much Logan? I relate to him very well.