Comments | vm_santa: second installment for salingergurl! out of (i am pretty sure) 3

acinogan in vm_santa

second installment for salingergurl! out of (i am pretty sure) 3

Jan 19, 2009 03:04

hello,
salingergurl , your secret santa is back with more fic for you! i am trying like heck to get it finished, but this isn't the end...

Author: acinogan
Title: Out Of Harm's Way
Pairings/Characters: Piz/Veronica, eventual LoVe, also Keith, Mac, Heather Button, mentions of Wallace but no sightings yet
Word Count: 5795 this installment
Rating: um, PG-13? a few ( Read more... )

2008 gifts, salingergurl

Comments 19

annegables January 19 2009, 10:19:52 UTC

Wow - really like this. Veronica has a lot in common with the Buffy/Riley relationship. Trying to be "normal".

acinogan January 21 2009, 06:17:23 UTC

you know, i hadn't thought about that, but maybe my subconscious did, because i watched the first half of S5 buffy while i was plotting this out... thanks for reading!

celtic_flicka January 19 2009, 14:58:00 UTC

Whoo! You give great UST. *fans self* That bathroom scene was killer.

(And I'm so glad that Heather's OK!)

acinogan January 21 2009, 06:30:38 UTC

thanks for reading & commenting - glad you like the bathroom scene. my little homage to the neptune high girls' room :) i didn't have it in me to put heather in danger for a holiday present.

celtic_flicka February 13 2009, 20:08:44 UTC

Oops--never mind my reply to the first part. I found the second again (clearly). Duh.

Sooooo...where's that last part? *nudge nudge* :)

acinogan February 13 2009, 21:01:05 UTC

it is close. very, very close. like 5/6 of the way finished. but the nudge is always appreciated :)

Thread 5

bkell13 January 19 2009, 17:39:47 UTC

This chapter...wow! The end was totally awesome! I felt my breath hitch when she pulled away and left, but maybe she'll get it in her head now, that Piz isn't her normal. Looking forward to more!

acinogan January 21 2009, 06:37:50 UTC

breath hitching? score! thanks for reading & the nice comment :) piz is so normal he's abnormal anyway. more coming soon!

havemy_heart January 19 2009, 18:39:23 UTC

I'm glad that Heather is okay. Logan doesn't need to lose anymore people.

That bathroom scene got me right in the heart. I'm glad that Veronica let it happen.

acinogan January 21 2009, 06:51:23 UTC

yeah, logan got a crap deal when it came to people sticking around. thanks for reading & commenting - there's something about bathrooms that must do it for veronica :)

p2880 January 19 2009, 21:09:21 UTC

I'm glad that V realizes she's so unhappy and so glad that she realizes that Logan adores her. Bathroom scene was perfect!

acinogan January 21 2009, 06:54:33 UTC

thanks so much! i'm glad that you're glad :)