Prelude to a Kiss (B5, J/D, S/D, rated G)

Mar 25, 2011 06:29


So nhpw  and I were briefly discussing the woeful lack of kissage in The Summoning, and a light bulb went off in my Susan/Delenn addled brain. Here is the result, ~1000 words, dashed off last night, so please alert me to things spellcheck might have missed.

One interesting note: OO's spell check suggests 'human-Minbari' be changed to 'human mini-bar ( Read more... )

s4, fanfiction, j/d, b5, s/d

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vjs2259 March 25 2011, 10:52:21 UTC
The plot bunnies are thick with this one...already a prequel and a sequel have begun to jostle for attention. Thanks for the immediate gratification!

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nhpw March 25 2011, 12:14:31 UTC
Oooo very nice! And the ending is so perfect.

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vjs2259 March 26 2011, 23:36:46 UTC
I forgot some bits; trying to add them in before posting this to ff.net.

It's hell writing a story in your head in the car on your way home. I kept trying to keep it in mind through all the usual 'pick up kids-make dinner-supervise homework' now go away and let me write evening!

The ending is not original just re-placed, and in a happier context.

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kungfuwaynewho March 25 2011, 18:21:26 UTC
Lovely!

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vjs2259 March 26 2011, 23:37:06 UTC
Thank you!

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