Reasons Unknown, Part 2

[visiblemarket]

Title: Reasons Unknown, Part 2
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Plaude
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: Not mine. At all.

Part 1

Comments

[lotus0kid]

Yay, more story! Still love the time-jump structure, and I really like all the little Petrelli family details, they're all great. I love that Peter sees Claude first.. um, I'm not entirely sure why.

Peter felt a little less guilty about how totally trashed he must look at the moment, but hey, at least some of the pictures were going to be interesting.
*snerk* Attaboy, Pete. ;D

But that was the thing, wasn’t it? He was easy to miss, and that’s what Peter had been doing. Missing someone he didn’t really have the right to miss.
That's a clever bit, right there. Aww, poor baby.

I really hope you finish up the next part soon, I'm dying to see Claude's reaction to Peter the Laundry Delivery Boy.

[visiblemarket]

I love that Peter sees Claude first.. um, I'm not entirely sure why.

Because it's...an important little detail...maybe.

That's a clever bit, right there. Aww, poor baby.

Clever, huh? I felt a...little obvious going there. But Peter's a bit obvious so, it felt right. Ish.

I really hope you finish up the next part soon, I'm dying to see Claude's reaction to Peter the Laundry Delivery Boy.

Hee. Well, it's written. I'll probably just post it before I go to work, but I need a while to get out of writing mode and into editing mode.

Thanks for reading!

[lotus0kid]

Because it's...an important little detail...maybe.
Ooh- Claude's invisible, isn't he? Oh boy, intrigue!

I felt a...little obvious going there. But Peter's a bit obvious so, it felt right. Ish.
I think it's a fun bit of wordplay, kinda. In any case, yes, especially at that age, I'd say Peter's not too big on subtlety.

Well, it's written. I'll probably just post it before I go to work
Woohoo! *airpunch*

[visiblemarket]

Ooh- Claude's invisible, isn't he? Oh boy, intrigue!

*wink* Maybe...

I think it's a fun bit of wordplay, kinda. In any case, yes, especially at that age, I'd say Peter's not too big on subtlety.

Peter's just very, very confused. It's not his fault.

Woohoo! *airpunch*

*airpunch*! Indeed.

[lotus0kid]

*wink* Maybe...
Oh you minx. You can't fool me!

Peter's just very, very confused. It's not his fault.
Again, at that age, it's hard to be anything but confused.

[visiblemarket]

Oh you minx. You can't fool me!

I really can't. Especially since I drop hints like they're hot. Whatever that means.

Again, at that age, it's hard to be anything but confused.

Except awkward. There's a lot of awkward, too.

[lotus0kid]

I really can't. Especially since I drop hints like they're hot. Whatever that means.
Ah well, either way, I can't wait to see what happens.

Except awkward. There's a lot of awkward, too.
Oh dear yes. About fifty-fifty, I'd say. Maybe even sixty-forty.

[visiblemarket]

Well, you won't have to wait that long...

Heh. I also think that the confused contributes to the awkward, so it probably does go up to the sixty-forty.

[lotus0kid]

You tease.. ^^

They feed off each other. It's a vicious cycle.

[visiblemarket]

You know it.

It's what makes life especially horrible, as a teenager. Because the acne and the puberty isn't enough.

[lotus0kid]

It's what makes life especially horrible, as a teenager. Because the acne and the puberty isn't enough.
Of course not. Goodness I'm glad I made it out of there alive. I can moan about not being a kid anymore all I want, but I'm still happier now than I ever was back then.

[visiblemarket]

Well, there's a difference between being a kid and being a teenager. Because being a kid? Awesome. Being a teenager? Good god, no.

[lotus0kid]

Heh, I guess it all blends together with distance.

[visiblemarket]

Indeed it does. Although I'll admit that as a kid you don't think it's all that awesome, being a kid. But as a teenager you're pretty sure it really does suck.

Also...*cough*.

[lotus0kid]

Youth is wasted on the young, that's for sure. No wonder it sucks so much to be a teenager, you're just beginning to realize how good you used to have it.

:D *bolts*

[visiblemarket]

Also, beginning to realize just how bad it can potentially get.

*waves* Knew you'd like that. ;)