The Heroes Bride (6/?)

Mar 24, 2008 14:32

Title: The Heroes Bride (6/?)
Characters/Pairings: Overall, Peter, Claude, Bennet, Adam, Mohinder, Sylar; In this chapter Peter, Adam, Elle, and more!. Oh, I'm excited.
Summary: My version of The Princess Bride, with assorted Heroes characters, centering on Plaude. In this chapter, some Peter/Adam and Peter/Elle bonding. And the appearance of, um ( Read more... )

adam, peter, claude, fic:heroes, fic, heroes bride, plaude

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c_quinn March 24 2008, 19:34:01 UTC
“It was love, if you can believe it,” and Adam shook his head, and his normal smirk returned, “Well, of course you’d believe it. But yes, I fell in love.”

Ah, Adam. His snark just masks a true romantic. Possibly. Maybe. Probably not but a girl can dream.

“It’s her…biological imperative, if you will,”

*snort*

“Ooh,” the blonde cooed, flipping her hair back as she regained her posture, an entirely different expression on her face and cool amusement in her eyes, “Gotta love the chivalry, kid.”

I now have to ask: anybody want a peanut?

Enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

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visiblemarket March 24 2008, 19:39:28 UTC
You're a quick one!

Ah, Adam. His snark just masks a true romantic. Possibly. Maybe. Probably not but a girl can dream.

Hey, he's married a ton of times. If that's not the sign of a true romantic, what is? ;)

*snort*

Heh. Oh, Gabriel.

I now have to ask: anybody want a peanut?

The answer to that, and much more, will come in the next installment of...The Heroes Bride.

Thanks for reading!

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starrdust411 March 24 2008, 23:33:33 UTC
I usually don't read anything besides Mylar fics, but I noticed this one today and it completely caught my attention. You have me at the edge of my seat. Although I've seen the movie version of Princess Bride and have a general idea of what's going to happen, but I'm excited about how you're going to fit in all the heroes characters and elements.

This is such a cute fic. Everyone's so in character and yet the story still feels very much Princess Bride-ish :)

I thought for sure that Adam was going to ask Peter to marry him, not Elle, lol. And can I assume that "Takezo Kensai" is going to make an appearence in the next chap? XD

I can't wait for the next update!

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visiblemarket March 24 2008, 23:36:54 UTC
Well, I'm glad to have caught your attention, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. There may even be...mylar-y bits at the end, for you to look forward to ;)

Thanks for reading!

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starrdust411 March 25 2008, 02:05:17 UTC
Ooo! That's great to hear! Now I'm even more excited for the next chapter :D *hugs* Keep up the great work :)

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visiblemarket March 25 2008, 02:09:33 UTC
*grins* I'll do my best!

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lotus0kid March 24 2008, 23:38:02 UTC
Dude, you weren't kidding about the plot moving along! It's all utterly awesome, I think this is my favorite chapter yet. I'm thrilled to see so many familiar faces! You've matched them all perfectly.

Matt froze, cocked his head to the right, almost comically, if his expression hadn’t precluded that.
And what's this? Matt's hearing thoughts? Intriguing!

Guh, I seriously Can Not Wait for more!

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visiblemarket March 24 2008, 23:44:46 UTC
I was also not kidding about the gigantically long part, was I? But hey, plot advancement! I'm glad all the characters came through properly. Especially since I...haven't written anyone aside from, like, Peter and Claude and sometimes Bennet in ages.

And what's this? Matt's hearing thoughts? Intriguing!

*tee-hee* Perhaps...

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

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lotus0kid March 24 2008, 23:58:22 UTC
I was also not kidding about the gigantically long part, was I?
Hey now, there is nothing wrong about an extra long chapter for a fic you're enjoying. Most definitely the polar opposite, in fact.

I...haven't written anyone aside from, like, Peter and Claude and sometimes Bennet in ages.
Weird, isn't it? Man, it's a good thing I love these boys so much, since they've totally ruined me for just about any other fandom, writing-wise. Except Firefly... maybe.

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visiblemarket March 25 2008, 00:05:11 UTC
Hey now, there is nothing wrong about an extra long chapter for a fic you're enjoying. Most definitely the polar opposite.

*grins* I do so love hearing that.

Weird, isn't it? Man, it's a good thing I love these boys so much, since they've totally ruined me for just about any other fandom, writing-wise.

It's true, though; some of the best writing in Heroes comes from Plaude writers. I think it's just because we've had to get so creative to get them together.

Except Firefly... maybe.

And the universe keeps pushing to watch this Firefly business! I'm serious, one of these days I'm just going to have to break down and watch it already.

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visiblemarket March 25 2008, 11:23:25 UTC
Came home from work, all grumpy, and now I'm happy again, because at least I don't guard hats for a living.

It's one of those things we should all count our blessings for, isn't it?

Thanks for reading!

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indyhat March 25 2008, 11:12:00 UTC
she attempted to slink towards him in boots designed more for riding than slinking

Hee. Poor Elle. Except not really, 'cause she's kinda crazy.

“Capital. I need you to marry her.”

LOL!

“It’s fine but…Adam, you know I…”

“Will never love again, yes, and I commend you for your certainty, Peter but…there are other matters at stake here beside your sense of devotion.”

Hee - lovely. I can completely hear Adam saying this, especially the initial sarcasm.

Elle's roomful of hats ... she is mad as a hatter! Or hattee, if she's wearing rather than making the things. Also, <3 Matt. With the hatt.

“Oh, for god’s sake,” the middle-man sighed, more annoyed at himself than anything, and casually slapped the woman across her face.

The hamminess in this is a thing of beauty :)

Really enjoying this! You are insane. Keep it coming.

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visiblemarket March 25 2008, 11:28:07 UTC
Hee. Poor Elle. Except not really, 'cause she's kinda crazy.

Awww, she just wants to be loved! Nothing wrong with that, is there?

Also, <3 Matt. With the hatt.

*snort* Lovely. I'll bet that's why he was assigned hat duty; Elle found it hilarious.

You are insane. Keep it coming.

Well, it's certainly been a while since I've heard that...

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!

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indyhat March 25 2008, 14:45:07 UTC
Awww, she just wants to be loved! Nothing wrong with that, is there?

No, I suppose not. But she's still crazy :P

*snort* Lovely. I'll bet that's why he was assigned hat duty; Elle found it hilarious.

It's practically Dr Seuss ;)

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visiblemarket March 25 2008, 14:47:42 UTC
No, I suppose not. But she's still crazy :P

Well, aren't we all, really, when you get right down to it? ;)

It's practically Dr Seuss ;)

*laughs* The Matt in the Hat? Oh, that has to be done. I should pitch it to all the Matthinder writers.

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