The Heroes Bride (2/?)

[visiblemarket]

Title: The Heroes Bride
Characters/Pairings: In this chapter, just Peter and Claude; in chapters to come, well, let's just say everyone. Among "everyone": Adam, Bennet, Mohinder, Sylar, Elle...and more!
Summary: My version of The Princess Bride, with assorted Heroes characters, centering on Plaude...
Rating: Overall, won't get beyond R, probably

Comments

[c_quinn]

I was wondering how you were going to deal with their separation and I think this plot-turn is quite clever. You've kept Claude in character. Well done.

“You’re not to wait for me, like some soddin’ romantic idiot, you got that? ”

Of course he'll wait, you silly man.

Wonderful work.

[visiblemarket]

I have to admit I was wondering a bit about it myself; the original plan was a bit different but...I'm glad this worked.

Of course he'll wait, you silly man.

Oh, will he?

Thank you!

[c_quinn]

It was more practical than having Claude leave to make his fortune on the sea. Not quite the Plaude angle we'd believe. [laugh]

And, yes, he will.

[visiblemarket]

Much more practical. Although it does make certain other aspect more difficult to bring in. *sigh*

*giggles* You really hope so, don't you?

[guanin]

This is so sweet and well-written. The descriptions of their growing relationship are so warm and loving that it makes me smile.

[visiblemarket]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's hard to build up a relationship that's going to justify the whole rest of the story, so I'm glad it come out as sweet and loving.

Thanks again for reading!

[trueroyalty]

*sighs & cuddles up to this story* Your writing makes me happy. I know, it's weird to comment on chapter 2 before chapter 1, but that's just how it turned out. So there. ;)

This is so frickin' adorable I can hardly stand it. I'm obsessed with The Princess Bride (it's sort of a group theme movie for my AZ friends and me), and of course Plaude, so this is a pairing made in Fiction Heaven. You're really pulling off the similarities with originality, and it's killing me not to be able to read the whole thing right now! :D

Thank you so much for, ya know, being awesome and stuff.

~TR

[visiblemarket]

The fact that my writing makes you happy makes me very, very happy. And hey, I love comments, whatever way/shape/order they come in. (Although if you were to write them in Morse Code, I might find that a tad bit annoying, but still cool).

Ah, the Princess Bride; it seems to just be one of those movies that everyone of a certain age and temperament love. And it's just so wonderfully quotable! And you don't know how much I wish I could just sit down and write the whole freakin' thing and just plunk it down for all of you to read. Really, I do. But trying that would probably kill me so...I'll try and update as often as I can.

Thank you so much for your awesome comment! I really appreciate hearing that stuff is working.

[trippypeas]

*wibbles* I love this so much..You know that...of course...

[visiblemarket]

Awww...no need to wibble! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading.

[trippypeas]

*snuggles*

[visiblemarket]

*hugs*

[lotus0kid]

Okay, first off, serious icon-love over here. Ohmygod, that's brilliant, and I'm proclaiming it the official unofficial Plaude battle cry.

Moving on, the last section is so perfect. It's awkward, and Claude's annoyed and secretive, and Peter's sweet and frustrated, and they're both in love- *sighs* that's just lovely. *scampers off to read it a few more times*

[visiblemarket]

Hee. Thank you! I got it from someone I don't remember, who got it from wild_huntress, but yeah, it's awesome.

*grins* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading, and re-reading!