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Le Tourbillon de la Vie (10/12)

Apr 02, 2009 00:54

Title: Le Tourbillon de la Vie
Characters: Claude, Sandra, an occasional OC or two
Pairings: Vague and one-sided Claude/Sandra, vague Claude/Noah if you really squint.
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Language, violence, wordiness. The usual.
Word Count: 634
Spoilers: In this part not terribly much but for the story overall it really helps to have read the ( Read more... )

sandra, le tourbillon de la vie, claude, noah bennet, fic:heroes

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lotus0kid April 2 2009, 15:02:16 UTC

Oh Claude! So worried for your lover best friend rookie you don't even notice your own injury. Luckily he has Sandra to take care of things from here, which I'm positive she's totally capable of doing with maybe a little help from Jean. And Sandra! Man, Noah's lucky. He's got one partner willing to take a bullet for him, and another willing to fire one. Dude's got it made.

visiblemarket April 2 2009, 15:05:41 UTC

Oh Claude indeed. He's such a sweet heart. And also kind of dense sometimes, especially concerning his lover best friend rookie and his lover best friend rookie's wife. Wow, that's a sentence you don't hear very often.

Noah is so lucky and deserves none of it. Goes on to shoot one partner and get the other mindwiped. That is just so not cool.

Thank you!

lotus0kid April 2 2009, 20:17:11 UTC

Eh, I wouldn't call it dense so much as insecure. Unwilling to either acknowledge his own feelings or contemplate the possibility they might be returned by his lover best friend rookie and his lover's best friend's rookie's wife, for fear of embarrassment and rejection. Poor baby.

Not at all.

Welcome!

visiblemarket April 2 2009, 20:37:04 UTC

Unwilling to either acknowledge his own feelings or contemplate the possibility they might be returned by his lover best friend rookie and his lover's best friend's rookie's wife, for fear of embarrassment and rejection

Heh. Just wait till you read the end.

Why can't you just be cool, Noah?! He ruins everything!

Oh my god, lj is being screwy with comment notifications again. Damn.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 00:24:05 UTC

Oh boy! XD

*sigh* It's like he doesn't know what's good for him.

Is it? Lame.

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 01:40:12 UTC

Hee. I love how excited you are by the possibility of Claude getting his heart thoroughly crushed.

It's like he doesn't know what's good for other people like Claude and Peter.

Well it was. Don't know about now.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 02:40:37 UTC

Oh, you wouldn't do that. ... No- no, you wouldn't. ... You- you better not!

All he knows is the exquisite art of pwn.

I'm pretty sure it's okay now.

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 02:42:18 UTC

...no. Why would I? It's not like he has to get all damaged and angsty so that Peter someone can take care of him.

Heh, well, he does know that art quite well.

Apparently so. But wasn't LJ supposed to be going through maintenance or something? Weird.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 02:47:12 UTC

Arrrgh. Or- or it could just be AU! No betrayal at all! Yeah, no lovely Peter/Claude, but I'm totally cool with Noah/Sandra/Claude OT3 goodness.

Indeed he does.

True, but- I dunno, mine's working fine.

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 02:48:45 UTC

*cough* A little late for that, really. I might as well post the next chapter there. So as to not keep you in suspense. Or I could just be totally evil.

He is the master of that art. But he's driven away anyone who'd be willing to appreciate it.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 02:56:33 UTC

*sigh* Well, I don't suppose I need to share my opinion on the matter.

He has. It's so sad. He's going to end up like Pai Mei and live alone in some Chinese monastery, doling out wisdom and punishment and stroking his long white beard.

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 02:58:04 UTC

Hah. Well, all right. For you.

And ever so often kicking the shit out of people. Which is a life, I guess, but...still.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 03:02:48 UTC

Yay- or, uh oh? I don't even know anymore.

He could've had so much more. *sorrowful headshake*

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 03:04:44 UTC

Hah. Well, about three seconds, so...

Well, there's still a chance. Maybe he'll learn.

lotus0kid April 3 2009, 03:11:00 UTC

I should keep refreshing my friends page?

Yeah, hope is not lost! Well, the possibility of a blissful polygamous relationship with Claude and Sandra is pretty much lost, what with Claude being spoken for. But Sandra might take him back, if he's good.

visiblemarket April 3 2009, 03:14:19 UTC

You could do so, yes.

Fingers crossed. But only if Bennet stops being such an idiot about things, because Sandra deserves better.

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