Dec 23, 2008 21:08
okay, so I was on aff, and complained about a story because a.) i had to log in to review and b.) the introduction pretty much told the story of the first nine or so chapters. But the author took my exact words, crap grammar and all. I'm kind of proud, but then not. I mean, c'mon, a little creativity please, and why not give the summary some time too. The story is basically about an abused uke neko and really angsty. Like, grapefruit and little junior angsty, the type of angst that makes you go "just kill yourself allready" since the protagonist's life is so miserable and you've lived enough pain for them. And still, we know nothing up until at least the tenth chapter about the neko's appearance, just how he lost his chastity. The story, regardless of all the angst, shows definite promise, just look at the summary. (look at it by going to aff and checking it out yourself)