fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 8
Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 8
Author: virdant
Length: 1,692 words; multi-part (8/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, YunChun, HoSu (HoMin, YooSu)
Summary: “Hero,” Changmin repeats, as if Jaejoong hadn’t said anything. “I’m actually… seeing you ( Read more... )
Author: virdant
Length: 1,692 words; multi-part (8/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, YunChun, HoSu (HoMin, YooSu)
Summary: “Hero,” Changmin repeats, as if Jaejoong hadn’t said anything. “I’m actually… seeing you ( Read more... )
Bwah. Well. Everybody is telling their own story, and they're all liars, and the only narrator I actually like in this fic is Changmin, who actually cooperates with me (and Jaejoong, sometimes), which is why things are probably so confusing. And all of them only know bits and pieces.
tbh, there weren't supposed to be so many character relations in the mental outline. I'm panicking.
I actually just... wrote the paragraph explaining implants. It's complicated and it's actually two different goals in one object... implants and the people in the implants are seperate (and now I'll shut up before I give away like, half of the point of chapter 9)
Changmin doesn't want to hurt anybody. Unfortunately, his priorities are screwed up. And he's too silly to see some things that are very clear to the others.
Lol, the story is mostly linear but there are points, just like when Junsu flashbacks, where I go and point out an event in the past, because it explains more in the plot and makes the ending better.
Lol, I suspect that my writing's especially sloppy in this chapter because I'm wrote this mostly to lead into chapter 9, so there are tons of almost-explainations but no real actual... explainations. D: And you should sleep! ♥ jia you on your essay, yuxi. ♥
(it's okay. Question help me to figure out what points need more elaboration. ♥ thank you for your questions)
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