fic-DBSK-Hand in Hand-Chapter 8

[virdant]

Title: Hand in Hand: Chapter 8
Author: virdant
Length: 1,692 words; multi-part (8/9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Tragedy, Angst, AU, Sci-fi
Pairing: JaeChun, YunChun, HoSu (HoMin, YooSu)
Summary: “Hero,” Changmin repeats, as if Jaejoong hadn’t said anything. “I’m actually… seeing you

Comments

[yuxo]

dude, what????? DDDD: i think you just confused me more. DDDD:

i don't know where the misunderstandings are because i can't distinguish between what's real and what's not. it's like everyone has their own version of what's been happening but then another character will be like, no, here's what actually happened.

and i can't figure out how they all know each other.

what do the implants do? if they're just to control how you act and think and dream etc etc, why does having one make you question yourself and the world? because...with junsu and hyukjae, then jaejoong and yoochun...what are the implants for if they just make the host rebel?

and i thought that changmin didn't want to do this willingly, but he was enticed into it. so why is he such a dickweed then? :X

the ending with yoochun and yunho confused the heeeellllll out of me. is this story being told in a linear-timeline?

i'm not usually this bad at deciphering fic, i'm so sorry lmfao. XD maybe it's cuz i'm reading this at 2:30 in the morning. *_____* maybe it's because i'm in the middle of writing my essay and reading this rofl. or maybe i'm just getting ahead of myself and should just wait for things to be answered in the last chapter. XD

ugh, i have so many questions. sorry about that. :P

[virdant]

D: sorry.

Bwah. Well. Everybody is telling their own story, and they're all liars, and the only narrator I actually like in this fic is Changmin, who actually cooperates with me (and Jaejoong, sometimes), which is why things are probably so confusing. And all of them only know bits and pieces.

tbh, there weren't supposed to be so many character relations in the mental outline. I'm panicking.

I actually just... wrote the paragraph explaining implants. It's complicated and it's actually two different goals in one object... implants and the people in the implants are seperate (and now I'll shut up before I give away like, half of the point of chapter 9)

Changmin doesn't want to hurt anybody. Unfortunately, his priorities are screwed up. And he's too silly to see some things that are very clear to the others.

Lol, the story is mostly linear but there are points, just like when Junsu flashbacks, where I go and point out an event in the past, because it explains more in the plot and makes the ending better.

Lol, I suspect that my writing's especially sloppy in this chapter because I'm wrote this mostly to lead into chapter 9, so there are tons of almost-explainations but no real actual... explainations. D: And you should sleep! ♥ jia you on your essay, yuxi. ♥

(it's okay. Question help me to figure out what points need more elaboration. ♥ thank you for your questions)