fic-DBSK-After All

[virdant]

Title: After All
Author: virdant
Length: 1,156 words; one-shot;
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, (romance?)
Pairing: JaeChun mild hints of YooSu and JaeHo
Summary: It’s a bad day, after all.
Warning: implied anorexia
Notes: Why yes, Plunging Downwards and Anodyne now have a 'verse of their own! Welcome to When the Enemy is the Self 'verse, this is Yoochun's

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[yuxo]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

OMFG. alsdfkjsadflkjwdasdfj OMFG.

He scoops up bites to eat ravenously, as if eating will swallow guilt and mistakes. The others watch him carefully, and Jaejoong’s eyes in particular watch, waiting for the next mistake, the next problem. Yoochun bites the tips of his chopsticks in his haste to swallow the next bite, and his teeth sting through the following gulps. He chews to a beat in his head, 3/4 time and 4/4 time and sometimes even 2/4 time, largo and presto and allegro all in the same song. The others watch him, waiting for his next mistake, and so he swallows the next bite and finishes his bowl, almost wishing for more.

AND I WAS DYING, OKAY. Just. Omfg. The parallel to MUSIC and fucking, 2/4 time!? DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU!? I like, shuddered. *_____*

Yunho snatches the bowl from Jaejoong and dumps the leftovers into the trash, scraping out everything with chopsticks. “Not yours,” he snaps before he calms slightly. “He didn’t eat anything,” he mutters as an entire bowl’s worth of rice is dropped into the plastic bag.

asfdplsakdfjPLDSKFJ:LSKDJFopwaifldskjf YUNHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. ;________________________; asdlkfjpewoaidsflkew;jalskdjf;l aksj;lfaewj pa sjdlkeasjdf

Yoochun's broken the way Jae's broken and they see the flaws and dangers in each other but not THEMSELVES. OMFG YOU STUPID SOULMATES SLDFJPWOEIUPSDLKJLEWJ PLSKDFJPO WIJLSKDFJ

;________; Wibbling so intensely.

Omfg I love this so hard. *____________*

...asdflawjfdalsdjfk I LOVE YOU OMFG.

♥

[virdant]

Thank you for reading ^^

Musical terminology is love; ^^;; I'm highly partial to it myself, though actually, I have about three fics planned that rely heavily on musical terminology... (I think I'll get killed by everybody haha...).

I'm er... tormenting Yunho next I think? sorry, but I think it's only fair for everybody to have a fic in this 'verse... though it'll likely take a while before I write it since I have crack prompts and kiss prompts that I need to do.

Mm, it's what I like the most in this 'verse. All of them are broken in some way (Changmin is probably the least broken because his fic was so short)... and the best part of it is, they're not angsting because nobody loves them! * is shot *.

ilu too~ Though shouldn't you be in bed? It's late where you are yes?

you can have the yunho angst fic when I write it? * feels bad for not writing you fic when you comment so nicely *

[yuxo]

Well of COURSE!! ^3^ I'll read anything you write. XD

OMFG YES. *__* I find it ridiculous when people don't understand it. Because like. It's MUSIC. asldkfjsdkjf MUSIC IS MY LIFE. LMFAO. Hold me, I'm a fermata. 8D *shot a lot*

Um, please do. :l I love this verse alsdkfjasdpiwapsldkjadsf. You write angst so well THOUGH YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE FLUFF AND SO MANY YESSES TO KISS!FIC HINT HINT NUDGE NUDGE LOL.

>_> I'm off to bed after this comment. XD Yay for 2:35 am! >_>;;;;;;;;;;

...If I could, I will die. ;_; Even more so because it's Yunho and he's my heart and alskdjslkdjlkff omfg. But no, I don't need stuff just cuz I comment with my fail! I comment with my fail all the time!! ^3^

You're such a doll. D: *clings* ♥

[virdant]

skjhahfd. And this is bandom yes? So music! alkdsf, I love music, can't live without it I don't know how I'm going to survive next year without piano guh. alskdfjakdlf. I love musical pickup lines. They're adorable. * flails * I need to go write fic with musical pickup lines alkdsjaf

^^;; Thank youu~ I'll try for crack? Fluff is beyond me now, I think ^^;;

g'night~ Sleep well! (though you'll probably be asleep by the time you get this haha).

's alright, I haven't written you anything really... and your comments always make me smile so it's just giving back happiness? okay, that doesn't make sense... >.> though is it me, or did you not request kiss-fic? maybe lj ate the comment?

^^;;