Comments | virdant: Fic-DBSK-Plunging Downards

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Fic-DBSK-Plunging Downards

Jul 16, 2008 22:48

Title: Plunging Downwards
Author: virdant
Length: 430 words; one-shot;
Rating: PG-13 / R
Genre: Angst, Romance (?)
Pairing: JaeMin, mild JaeChun
Summary: For theirs is a violent love.
Warning: Dubcon.
Notes: Sorry.

Plunging Downwards

( Changmin is shivering when Jaejoong sees him... )

genre: romance, pairing: dbsk jaechun, organizational: fic, genre: angst, fandom: dbsk, multi-part: when the enemy is the self, one-shot, pairing: dbsk jaemin

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virdant July 18 2008, 07:35:40 UTC

Thank you for reading; I'm glad you like it.

I'm glad that you felt the drowning emotion; I was trying for breathless in this writing style, so I'm glad that it seems to have worked!

Thank you; I'm glad you find my writing interesting and you like it. :)

kimjaeshim July 17 2008, 15:01:20 UTC

woah! changmin is really something, ne?

virdant July 18 2008, 07:33:37 UTC

Thank you for reading.

Ah, desperate times call for desperate measures. ^^

kurogoma July 17 2008, 15:18:10 UTC

changmin's not the only one who was drowning, it seems...
has a pandora's box been opened?

virdant July 18 2008, 07:33:09 UTC

Thank you for reading ^^

* nods * Changmin essentially drags Jaejoong down; the idea was to express that one person drowning impacts the others around him.

Eh, pandora's box? I don't think it's that extreme, but certainly the fact that Jaejoong interacted with Changmin causes emotional repercussions, but I probably'll leave that open for interpretation.

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virdant July 18 2008, 07:22:47 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^^

yuxo July 17 2008, 16:22:52 UTC

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

I had like. Trouble breathing through half of that.

Omfg. I can't pinpoint exactly where it happened but I was all not breathing and dying and omfg.

;_; Why must you do this to my OTP. ;_; SOULFIGHTERS, BE HAPPY. ;_________;

But I enjoy it, omfg. *_* I love your writing saldfja;slfjaskjdfsafd

♥

virdant July 18 2008, 07:21:54 UTC

Thank you for reading (especially since this is not crack but angst) ^^;;

It is horrible of me to take pleasure in your temporary breathing trouble, but I'm utterly delighted that you had said breathing problem (I suppose I'm a bit of a sadist) because it means that the style worked and that makes me happy. * is happy *

Ahahah... I'm a sadist and I find tormenting people far more interesting than giving them happy endings? I mean, um. I'm sorry. I'll try to write more happy stories, but everything I write seems to be angst right now (other than crack-fic, but even that's turning a little... not-funny).

My writing is so random, the style changes all the time and it's horribly inconsistent, but I'm glad you like it! ^^ ♥