Dr. Feel Good

May 16, 2011 16:49

Title: Dr. Feel Good
Pairing: Key/Di (Rania)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Key asks Di to teach him the Dr. Feel Good dance.
Notes: I dreamed about it. 8] Plus they make a really fucking cute couple o k. I also really love Rania and would like to write more of them... Anyway this has no real plot, I just dreamed about them making out and getting somewhat ( Read more... )

group: shinee, group: rania, #crossover: key/di

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epikfailure May 16 2011, 23:52:15 UTC
NINJA SPOT STUDYING RN I'LL BE BAAAAACK

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vipjuly May 16 2011, 23:54:25 UTC
... jesus christ xD

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epikfailure May 17 2011, 22:39:57 UTC
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM


... )

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vipjuly May 17 2011, 23:18:30 UTC
your comments always make me so so pleased

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rawfudge May 16 2011, 23:55:38 UTC
Oh my. That was... wow. I don't know too much about Rania but Di seems interesting, haha.

“I didn’t think he was the hands-on type.”
I love this line LOL

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vipjuly May 17 2011, 01:07:27 UTC
i still don't know too much about rania, i'm slowly gathering my information even though i've been into them since they've debuted *_* they're just gorgeous and alkse5ruagyr
anyway thank you for reading! glad you gave it a shot even though you're not into rania lmfao xD

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rudyard May 17 2011, 00:07:43 UTC
ejkgsnjkgeg
omg. i never would've thought to pair these two up, never. And i never really paired Key with a girl anyways but now after reading this, I can definitely see Key and Di being together :o

this was really good, honest to God.

when the song first came out I was hoping and wishing that Key would learn the dance because I could see him doing it and everything and the way you described this, how you wrote it was just amazing.

brilliant :D

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vipjuly May 17 2011, 01:08:48 UTC
i would have never paired them up if i didn't have that dream of them making out. o_O; lmao omg but yeah, they're both 91'ers and i really want key to recruit her into his line!! ;____;
and unnffff i really wish he would learn the dance but i think sme would shit brix D; we can hope though!!
keke thank you for enjoying ^__^ ♥

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SPOT lubzyou May 17 2011, 00:20:52 UTC
you wrote it, you did!

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Re: SPOT vipjuly May 17 2011, 01:09:16 UTC
but ofc i did~ ^______^ kkkk

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Re: SPOT lubzyou May 17 2011, 02:07:51 UTC
Your description of Key, at the beginning, is perfect and God’s honest truth.
…something masculine about it. It was commanding, it was domineering - he was rubbing it in women’s faces that he could dance better than them, that he could capture men’s attention quicker than they could
Unf, I love you more and more.

For someone who wasn’t in the mood to write smut you have written some excellent almost smut. Phew!

…Di hastily trying to fasten her top again, Key helping her and fixing her hair…
Always the stylist, our Key.

“He’s the best at what he does.”
One could say something similar about you.
:*

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Re: SPOT vipjuly May 17 2011, 03:32:59 UTC
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk well it's been a while since i've written so i'm easing back into it ^^;
i'm glad this was good though!! and how i described in the beginning... i think that's how most lockets feel about him, and most girls feel about key whenever they see him and try to form an opinion about him (that is, if they feel anything sexual for him). there really is just this strange... undeniably manly something or other about him, despite the girl dances and the eyeliner and the girly squeals and stuff. *_*

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g_odalisque13 May 17 2011, 01:40:55 UTC
spot!!

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g_odalisque13 May 17 2011, 01:49:11 UTC
ya know, i think i ship this now.
goddamn. i mean, i never like het with key b/c i don't buy it, but you made me buy it! and plus, it's Di and i'm sure he'd make an exception for her anyway. haha.

It was commanding, it was domineering - he was rubbing it in women’s faces that he could dance better than them, that he could capture men’s attention quicker than they could with the flick of his wrist or the twist of his hips.
THIS.

Swiveling her hips atop him, in this position with her knees spread on either side of his body, she started to grind down, applying pressure to his trapped erection. He swore under his breath, his glasses went askew and his hair was a wreck as his hands ran over the tops of her thighs, fingers dipping into the tops of her boots before sliding up to run over her covered clit.
/dead

you fucking nailed it jillian. i don't know if anyone else could have pulled this off. but you really, really did.
amazing ♥

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vipjuly May 17 2011, 05:10:53 UTC
now to wait for them to one day actually interact so i can really cream my panties... *___*

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