Sweat

Jun 18, 2010 17:09

Title: Sweat
Pairing: Jonghyun/Onew
Rating: NC-17
A/N: So this was supposed to be something completely different but I ended up erasing it and re-typing it like 3 times. My muse went bye-bye and I’m trying to lure her back with sweaty tasty handsome boys. 8]
It’s sorta working. xD
Bleh I really dunno about this Jongyu I'm so weird about writing them ( Read more... )

group: shinee, pairing: jonghyun/onew

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vipjuly June 19 2010, 00:09:34 UTC
goyangi

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g_odalisque13 June 19 2010, 00:17:59 UTC
SPOT ♥

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g_odalisque13 June 19 2010, 04:56:15 UTC
god. i am such a closet jongyu shipper.
so i love you sfm for writing this ♥

this was just kjrfniewodnmiwjdo.
i have no words. i am completely incoherent right now. even though i wish i could give you an epic comment for this. b/c you deserve one.
but my brain is mush- beautiful, wonderful mush ♥

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vipjuly June 19 2010, 05:00:28 UTC
LMFAO I'm a closet jongyu shipper too :| it's ridic lmao

BUT YAY I like incoherent comments they make me smile
<33333
So glad you liked darling <3333333

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jokikuy June 19 2010, 00:35:56 UTC
swoop!

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jokikuy June 19 2010, 00:56:56 UTC
So I was supposed to be figuring out what to make for dinner but this popped up in my inbox and so I read this instead. I still have no clue as to what to make for dinner, but I what I do know is that was smexy and hot and rough and all sorts of UNF!

Jonghyun wouldn’t be able to concentrate long enough to form an educated response.
I wouldn't be able to either. Hot and sweaty Jinki tends to make my brain go to mush.

They both cried out, unable to contain the noise as Jinki’s body clamped around Jonghyun’s dick and either tried to suck it in further or expel it, Jonghyun wasn’t sure but the constricting muscles were amazing around his cock and he rocked his hips, he couldn’t be patient, not now, not ever, not when it came to Jinki.
Long as fuck sentence, but one of the best!

The end was just soooo...them! This happened before!? Jjong just can't handle himself around sweat-drenched Jinki. Heh.

“You mean you want Key to join us next time?”
You have successfully set yourself up for a sequel. YAY!

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vipjuly June 19 2010, 01:21:20 UTC
Lmao I'm making spaghetti for dinner, you're welcome to join us 8]

I have a lot of long sentences >_> Idk lmfao I have an aversion to avoiding periods... unless using ellipses. :B

I'm so glad that it was a believable Jongyu xDDD *was super worried*

And God damn it I know I keep setting myself up for sequels I should really knock it off. :|
LMFAO well if my muse permits it we'll see at what I can cook up ;D
THANKS SO MUCH CUTIE <3

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jokikuy June 19 2010, 02:04:48 UTC
Thanks for the invite! But I finally decided to make pork chops :)

Well I hope your muse lets you. If not, I'll go find him/her/it and shake some sense into them. lol

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Re: Allow me to express myself in gif form... vipjuly June 19 2010, 02:10:45 UTC
OH YOU <3
THOSE GIFS ARE BEAUTIFUL.
So glad you liked xDDD
i have such a fetish for sweaty!SHINee it's ridic

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bunni102 June 19 2010, 03:05:10 UTC
OMG, I FREAKING DIED BIG TIME READING THIS. I was like holding my breathe through out the fic. Like seriously ITS ACTUALLY JONGHYU, LIKE JONGHYUN TOPS!! FInally I wanted Jong to have some dignity back. I mean he is always uke and Jinki is always seme. I mean I love that too but sometimes having a seme Jong and a uke Jinki is just plain hot.♥
OH GOSH!!! * does from massive nosebleed* i love how it was so detail, you let my imagination run like crazy~ LOL, I sound like a pervert. But its okay this fic was just so smexy and smutty. It was PURE WIN and LOVE~♥
OH THE ENDING!!! :D Now I really want sequel to this. I mean OT3 TIME~ Jong should top Jinki, and Jinki can top Key. I mean that is hot. XD Dear, Im gonna mem this fic too. Thank you for feeding my JongYu deprive self~ I freaking love you for it.♥

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vipjuly June 19 2010, 04:09:43 UTC
LMFAO OH YOU'RE CUTE <3
I'm so glad you liked this <3
I have another jongyu if you're interested (but Jonghyun is on bottom) that you can read here if you like :]

Annnnd a sequel might happen I'm not too sure yet :P
Thanks again for liking!! Glad I could help with your jongyu deprivation xD

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