Title: a trip down memory lane Fandom: exo Pairing: suchen/jundae Rating: r Word count: 4,100 Summary: It takes a visitor at 1am in the morning to go straight to heaven.( “Falling in love is always the hardest.” )
The pros and cons of going after 'Shure is that there is barely anything to point out anymore OTL Ah well, as they say: It’s the new beginning of a new day, and the start of a new story //laughs and rolls off (Hardly relevant but I had an urge to ctrl+p it in)
He leans back down to level himself so that he is face to face next to the younger. Duuuude, if you're face to face wouldn't you be opposite them or...??
work out a sense of direction As they say, you can only walk (stumble in this case) in one direction //insert music//
stumbling and tripping for majority of the trip. Tripping for majority of the trip. Ohkay.
Oh and as 'Shure said, there are some awfully long sentences there. Makes me wonder how many commas one can fit into a sentence but you answered that: 7. Extra points if you can find which sentence it is lmaoooo Most of the sentences have at least 2 commas, which makes most of them quite long. (The sentences, not //that's what she said//)
And a slightly off-topic side note to the holder of the 3rd slot: You is poop, you is poop, you got got 3rd <33
+ one last comment: or if being with you for eternity was. Ciao.
i AM AWFULLY SORRY BUT CHII WANTED FIRST SPOT SO--- <333 forgive me lol. didn't you know, commas and i are in an open relationship hAHAHAH. BUT YEAH I NEEDA FIX ON THEM ORZ. THANKS CHIBI.
thanks for reading it through, and actually taking time to post a comment. q u q
Ah well, as they say: It’s the new beginning of a new day, and the start of a new story //laughs and rolls off (Hardly relevant but I had an urge to ctrl+p it in)
He leans back down to level himself so that he is face to face next to the younger.
Duuuude, if you're face to face wouldn't you be opposite them or...??
work out a sense of direction
As they say, you can only walk (stumble in this case) in one direction //insert music//
stumbling and tripping for majority of the trip.
Tripping for majority of the trip. Ohkay.
Oh and as 'Shure said, there are some awfully long sentences there. Makes me wonder how many commas one can fit into a sentence but you answered that: 7. Extra points if you can find which sentence it is lmaoooo
Most of the sentences have at least 2 commas, which makes most of them quite long. (The sentences, not //that's what she said//)
And a slightly off-topic side note to the holder of the 3rd slot: You is poop, you is poop, you got got 3rd <33
+ one last comment: or if being with you for eternity was. Ciao.
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didn't you know, commas and i are in an open relationship hAHAHAH. BUT YEAH I NEEDA FIX ON THEM ORZ. THANKS CHIBI.
thanks for reading it through, and actually taking time to post a comment. q u q
<3333
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