I like the image of Dean in the bathroom <3 and sneaking into the bedroom <3
Was the love scene the reason you don't like this chapter? It's hard to write detailed love scenes so that they flow. I'm having a hard time with a scene for that reason.
I noticed you switched person to Lexi for one line. Was that intentional? More might have been nice -like half Dean/half Lexi<3
Thanks. I liked that part with Dean as well. The love scene was one of the reasons. I took it out then added it back in. I changed the tense. Getting the flow right is always am issue. I try not to use as and while too much but it never seems to work. And yes the one Lexi line was intentional. I haven't decided if lexi gets pregnant here or not.
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Was the love scene the reason you don't like this chapter? It's hard to write detailed love scenes so that they flow. I'm having a hard time with a scene for that reason.
I noticed you switched person to Lexi for one line. Was that intentional? More might have been nice -like half Dean/half Lexi<3
DOES LEXI BECOME PREGNANT HERE??!
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The love scene was one of the reasons. I took it out then added it back in. I changed the tense. Getting the flow right is always am issue. I try not to use as and while too much but it never seems to work.
And yes the one Lexi line was intentional. I haven't decided if lexi gets pregnant here or not.
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