Believe me, I've thought all that out. If you've read any of my past stories you'd probably see a pattern of contradiction in the characters, because I feel it's more true to life. Everyone is always conflicted about what they really want to do in life, especially in relationships. At least, that's my opinion. I think Justin really wants to be with Brian, but at the same time he really doesn't. I thought I'd added enough of Justin's thoughts in this chapter to show that, but maybe you didn't percieve it that way, which is totally valid.
All I can say is that I have every chapter mapped out and that by the time the story is over you'll be able to know what Justin is thinking and has been thinking about his relationship with Brian. Where he wants it to go, and what he does and doesn't want it to be anymore. I think 6 more chapters should accomplish that. At least, I hope so.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it, and all I ask is that you hang in there. If you want to take a break, and wait until it's completed to finish reading, I understand! ;)
All I can say is that I have every chapter mapped out and that by the time the story is over you'll be able to know what Justin is thinking and has been thinking about his relationship with Brian. Where he wants it to go, and what he does and doesn't want it to be anymore. I think 6 more chapters should accomplish that. At least, I hope so.
Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it, and all I ask is that you hang in there. If you want to take a break, and wait until it's completed to finish reading, I understand! ;)
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