WTF? part three (read original post for text COLOR!)

[violetchaos_364]

I’m still at a loss, I’ve ALREADY been like this for days (getting worse?)

‘Cause I’ve been like this for days, just crazy about it,

What it’s like:

and it’s starting to get, you >you, general you?< know,

a little uncomfortable. (Not in control is uncomfortable?


connotation:

uncomfortable (fill in the blank here, folks!)

and repeats with what it’s like:

And it’s like a sky dive or getting high,

the kinda thrill that will maybe kill you. >you, general you?<

And it’s like I’m eye to eye with a wild lion.

Oooh, I don’t know what to tell you. >you, you: rich rhyme<

There’s just this thing about you.

thing would MAYBE kill you

thrill that COULD kill you

thrill that MAYBE kill you

nice to mix this up a bit, doesn’t need to be the same words in the same order

the three lines are also concept rhymes

Question: Is it even okay that I’m questioning this?

Do you think I’m out of line?

Or maybe it’s fine, maybe it’s alright. (I don’t know if the ‘I’ here is emphasized enough to count as a rhyme, but it is there)

It’s like I’m eye to eye with a wild lion.

Oooh, I don’t know what to tell you. >rich rhyme<

There’s just this thing about you.

Why is he saying “I” so much? In rhyme and in the words?