Fic: Turn Up the Fakes and Lies

[vinvy]

Title: Turn Up the Fakes and Lies
Author: iron_fist123 and vinvy
Rating: R (language and adult themes)
Summary: Are you afraid of us?
Warnings: Profanity, Empty Threats, Caffeine Withdrawals, mild Violence
Disclaimer: Don't own anything but the plot. None of this happened. (Duh.)
A/N: Hey, yeah, its short. There's also some overlap. Blame post length

Comments

[defect_no9]

First comment? WHERE IS EVERYONE?! Anyway, here I am at part two, and all I can think about is MORE. MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE. So for the sake of coherent thought, here is how I really feel:

I loved the way you brought the hostage in. I can SEE IT. And it's amazing. Dusty white uniform, burlap sack over the head, the shuffled steps of someone inexperienced with the rough terrain of the desert. LOVE. Gerard finally got his coffee, and is back to being our fearless leader, while Kobra is busy being SCARY AS FUCK. Seriously, that doctor is doing a hell of a job at not shitting himself. Kobra is quick-tempered and ruthless as all hell, which I LOVE here, because it's CANON. You write possibly the best Kobra Kid out there, and I am super excited that I've been able to read him like this. Frank is busy trying to keep a level head here, but you can still see the compassion leaking out. He really shouldn't be worrying about what could happen to this doctor's kid,(the guy did invent a deadly virus killing children every day) but can't help asking himself some moral questions. Mostly, Frank keeps the human element in there. He's confused and not as jaded as the rest of the killjoys, but he's maybe more valuable just asking the questions that the others can't ask anymore. You can't ask yourself if you really would murder a child knowing your own is on the way, if you are trying to get a vaccine made for your unborn child. I love how deep this story goes, or maybe how open you allow it to be to interpretation. In many ways, this world flows just as smoothly and quickly as the one being designed by Gerard in real life. I could analyze and type all day, but this is LONG now, so I'll leave off for now.

THANKS FOR POSTING, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! ♥ ♥ ♥

[vinvy]

You know, I don't know where everyone went. XD

Oh joy. You like our ruthlessness. I was a little concerned that it'd be too much... though my mentor always says that when you think its too much you need to go even farther (with writing, that is).

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you... you just... you did not just compare our fic to the genius of Gerard's brain. Oh. OH. OH MY GOD. You really did. Lemme read that again.

You... my day has been made. HOLY FLYING MONKIES. You compared us to G. uuuh..... I'm gonna go squeal at how incredibly good that made me feel. THANK YOU SOSOSOSOSOSO FRICKIN MUCH. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3