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vintagebetty

what do i know about you?

Jul 11, 2006 19:11

Ode to the Soap

CLEAN
in one thousand milligrams
filling the vestibule
to my innards
of nothing
and the far-away
The manufactured mystery
muted,
fluxed,
tenuous silence
swallowed by echoes
The child
in white innocence
makes irridescent globes
to float;
to fall;
to dry-
a layer thinner
half coalesced
into flesh
In bitter lather
the final film slides
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Comments 8

uncommiserated architect's table platitudesrus July 11 2006, 22:03:38 UTC

An areteria cervicalis jointed is a Madea blazed.

starry_ink_well July 12 2006, 07:22:51 UTC

i love this. :)

vintagebetty July 12 2006, 12:00:04 UTC

homework! HAHA=p

pinkpixxxie July 12 2006, 07:25:59 UTC

HAHA YOU'RE ACTUALLY HEARING IT FROM ME AGAIN: You write amazing! :)

vintagebetty July 12 2006, 13:09:40 UTC

oh, you partonize me! <3

vintagebetty July 12 2006, 13:10:01 UTC

haha -tro..

emulsion_lift July 15 2006, 01:47:41 UTC

found you randomly. friended hastily. do that seldom. ly.

:)

vintagebetty July 15 2006, 03:00:45 UTC

haha, sure, why not?=)