Comments | vinniebolzano: And I Would Have Stayed Up With You All Night

vinniebolzano

And I Would Have Stayed Up With You All Night

Feb 01, 2009 13:27

( And How Can I Stand Here With You And Not Be Moved By You? )

Comments 8

theepiccek February 1 2009, 22:42:06 UTC

I like the idea of this, it's a very good start & the comparison of Dominique and Grayson is very sweet and well done.

There were a few grammar issues - nothing major, just a few runaway commas and things like that.

vinniebolzano February 2 2009, 16:57:08 UTC

O Thank You soo much I really cannot believe anyone actually bothered to read that. I am so grateful
Thank you for mentioning the commas and all I really am horrible with puncuations and any constructive criticism is always welcome.
I really love Grayson as well. He turned out to be someone very different than what i had intended.

ladymacbeth922 February 5 2009, 11:23:14 UTC

This piece is teeming with potential. I like Dominique very much and I think Grayson is so compelling.

But I was sort of blown away by Brendans' perspective. very interesting!

vinniebolzano February 9 2009, 16:16:50 UTC

well thank you so much love if you hadnt said that i would have yelled at you i have been looking at some of "the developments" you have been up to drastic to say the least! but brimming with gratitude for you loving grayson and being blown away by brandoni will curb my instincts [BIG SMILE]

ladymacbeth922 February 9 2009, 16:40:09 UTC

You havent seen everything yet. Not my journal at least. Have you?

moleyneux February 13 2009, 09:52:30 UTC

I like how simply this is put. Good job,you!

I think I'd like Dominique to be a tad more selfaware but she is charming as she is. Brendan? It sounds like I would very much like to tap that. :)

vinniebolzano February 13 2009, 13:07:58 UTC

aww how sweet of you to say! thanks Brandon to tell u the truth is based on this really hot guy at school so i would completely have to agree!

moleyneux February 13 2009, 13:10:36 UTC

First of all- your icon! Gaspard, my love!!

Second- Tell me more! Hot guys, schools- jerk-like hot guys are my SPECIALITY.