Comments | vinib: Way Back into Love

vinib

Way Back into Love

Jun 10, 2012 22:07

It was a long day. Dean was tired, just tired. All he wanted to do was get into his car, drive to a remote location and go to sleep. But he knew it was impossible. Sammy was running high fever, and if Dean didn’t get back, Sammy wouldn’t even eat his dinner, let alone meds.

That’s when he saw him. Just another pretty party boy, wearing a skin tight ( Read more... )

destiel: meet-cute, dean winchester, meaningless kiss, sam winchester, supernatural, castiel novak, ellen, cas, bobby singer

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moushkas June 10 2012, 22:15:49 UTC

This was so cute.
I especially liked the ending :)

I would love to read more from this verse. It looks really awesome so far!

vinib June 11 2012, 07:17:27 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

lillyg June 10 2012, 23:16:23 UTC

That was sweet. Though I find the last few lines quite corny compared to the rest of the story which was progressing neatly. :/

Glad you liked it. vinib June 11 2012, 07:23:31 UTC

I had no idea how to end the first chapter... So there!

Hope the second one lives up to your expectations :)

Re: Glad you liked it. lillyg June 11 2012, 11:22:47 UTC

Yeah, maybe you should have let it more opened, because we went from they don't know each other to soul mate in 2 second flat. Reading, I thought WTF? lol. Not to mention if I had seen a guy I've only seen drunk or dry humping some guy on a dancefloor with hi arm around my brother, I'd have laid him out in 2 seconds flat.

Re: Glad you liked it. vinib June 11 2012, 12:36:29 UTC

I agree it was something that bothered me too... at first. But Dean's an excellent judge of character. So I guess, he knew the guy was harmless or he wouldn't even have gotten him home, let alone left him alone with his teenage brother.

augustbaby10 June 11 2012, 03:16:21 UTC

Oh I loved this! I really hope you write more. I'd love to see their relationship as it progresses.

vinib June 11 2012, 07:20:43 UTC

Thanks!

Even I can't wait to see how this all goes down. But I do know that Dean and Cas have been together for about 10 years now, Sammy is a pre-law and they own the Harvelle's together.

I hope they make me a part of their journey :)

apolla_92 June 11 2012, 05:49:37 UTC

That was beyond adorable!!! I loved it! It was so sweet and Sammy, ugh just about gave me a cavity! This was great, thanks for writing and sharing this. :)

vinib June 11 2012, 07:22:22 UTC

"Sammy, ugh just about gave me a cavity!"

I know right! He's too cute and adorable. Just wait till he grows up a notch.

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vinib June 11 2012, 07:24:11 UTC

The second one is still in the oven ;)