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Affection

Jun 15, 2010 15:39

Title: Affection
Author: thegraduate09
Word Count: 309
Fandom: Circle of Magic & Sequels.
Rating: PG
Summary: Sometimes it's too late to get close to someone even when it shouldn't be.
Author's Note: I'm not entirely sure where this came from, but it was very determined to be written. No real pairing, although you could read it as Briar/Tris/Sandry/Daja all ( Read more... )

char: daja kisubo, char: briar moss, fandom: circle of magic, type: drabble, genre: friendship/family, !fic, char: sandrilene fa toren, char: trisana chandler

Comments 3

peroxidepirate June 15 2010, 23:14:59 UTC

This is really interesting! I like the mystery of not knowing who the narrator is, and I think you've hit on a truth about Tris and the Circle.

thegraduate09 June 15 2010, 23:34:24 UTC

Thank you!

rosaxx50 August 27 2010, 09:55:52 UTC

Oh, I simply adore the dynamics of the circle, and I'm always partial to those "watching from the outside" fics. I think it's a good thing we don't know who's narrating - it really could apply to anyone.

The undertones of jealousy from the narrator are so fun to read (that says something about the sort of person I am, doesn't it, but it really is!). I did think she was making more of an effort during Circle Opens, but this is exactly what she's like after WoTE. Well done.