[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 8,055 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I ( Read more... )
"Jinki tries to ignore the way she looks a little disgusted when she mentions Minho’s name, almost as if the thought of her Son mixing with Kibum was hard to believe and that kind of pissed Jinki off a little and for some reason he was overcome with what felt almost like empathy for the younger boy at the knowledge that Kibum had dated Minho for all that time and had never been introduced to the boy’s Mother or Father and Jinki knew that had to hurt the other but Kibum kept that relaxed look on his face." HOLY SHIT YOU JUST WROTE MORE OR LESS ABOUT SOMETHING THAT MADE ME CRY HARD TWO DAYS AGO. OH SHIT. LET'S JUST... LET'S JUST SAY I CAN RELATE TO KIBUM QUITE WELL, OKAY? OKAY.
*trying to calm down*
Sleeping Kibum is the most adorable sight ever ;~~~~; I love how he began to change, it seems like there's so many sides to him, the most visible one is that bitchy one, but I think it's only a shell. Deep inside, he's just kind of lonely ;~~~~;
Gosh, and I love their talks... and how Jinki is slowly beginning to realize he's in love with Key ;~~~~~;
"Jinki wanted to point out that not everyone who liked dark things suffered from depression " SO MUCH WIN, HE'S TALKING ABOUT ME XDDD
And, that moment when Kibum walked into Minho and Jinki OMG I FELT LIKE SCREAMING
And then, the date... and Kibum's sudden confession, that it was more than Minho has ever done for him as a real boyfriend OH MY HEART
And the ending. Gosh, the fact that Kibum's convinced that Jinki's with Taemin (I really like OnTae btw) makes me groan in frustration because I CAN SEE CLEARLY THAT KEY'S FALLEN FOR JINKI TOO AND ARGH WAE >///////////<
And I really thought they would kiss ;o; tho, on the other hand, as Jinki is 'in relationship', Key's too respectful to force him into a kiss... ESPECIALLY when he's rather convinced that he's more of a burden to Jinki than anything. That's what I think. OMG.
Off to the next chapter >O<
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Haha, I know, he is all cute and innocent when sleeping... kekekeke ;3.
Yeah, that's exactly what I was trying to portray, that actually he's just kind of a sad person that doesn't really know what to do with himself and has trust issues. I'm so glad that you saw that, XD~.
Haha, I know, I always love OnKey's interactions because there always so awkward, haha and playful (=-_^=).
Nobody can resist Key, ne, hehe (=^____^=).
Haha! Yey! Exactly, I always think that, just because I like dark colours and don't wear pink people think I'm all emo all the time. Haha. Go JINKI!!
LOOOOL! Your reaction is perfect, I love the tension between OnKeyHo, looool :3.
Doki~doki. I felt the same way when I was writing that which is actually kind of sad, but I just WAAAAH... OnKey here is so perfect.
LOOOOL. OnTae is a relatively new liking for me, but I couldn't help but use Taemin as fuel for Kibum's jealousy. I sense pretty boy tension between them. Trololol~ :3.
Your totally right in that thinking, Key does think that he is causing Jinki trouble. Waaaah, I'm so happy your seeing all the things I was trying to project in the story, (=^____^=).
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