[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]

Jun 12, 2012 02:39


100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 8,055 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I ( Read more... )

type: themes challenge, rating: r, !fanfic, !fandom: shinee, pairing: onkey

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sunday_lee June 12 2012, 15:43:25 UTC
I've just read the two chapters (in my office) and finally back home to comment ^^
when I first read the description about Kibum's character, I thought he would be an dangerous bitchy fierce spoiled kid who will do anything to get what he wants but he made a bunch of ridiculous wrong assumptions about Minho's new boyfriend and most of all the crazy conclusion about Jinki was dating Taemin ^^ yes, Kibumie is such a bitchy spoiled kid but adorable and childish at the same time, I really want to know what's running in his mindset to come to those guessing. I felt like he's seeking for attention too, maybe be a son of billionaires is not that good.
I'm somehow curious about Minho and Key 's past relationship when Key confessed that Jinki had been more of a boyfriend than Minho ever was in all of the two years they were together, uhm.. it was two years, quite long for a relationship, I wonder what happened and why they broke up, Minho even hide their relationship from his family
And Jinki, he really has all good material of a perfect boyfriend, aw I wanna have a boyfriend like him T_T (that why I never get myself a boyfriend!) ^^ I like the little things he did for Kibum such as still holding the door open for him even though his hands stuffed with Kibum's shopping bags ^^ I also like Jinki's inner thoughts, yeah he is probably a little bit in love with Kibum, both of them are a little bit in love with each other keke
Can't wait for next chapter
Thank you for your writing~

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villa_visualkei June 12 2012, 17:23:51 UTC
Ah, thank you for taking the time to comment when you got back home, that's really sweet, :3.

Haha, yeah I am not really sure what is going on inside Kibum's head either. Haha. He is a mystery, he's a complex character. I was sort of trying to show that their might be other reasons for his outward behavior and that maybe he isn't actually as fierce as people expect him to be.
Yeah, I don't think he's that happy with his life either.

I like that your curious but now I feel like maybe their relationship is a bit of a disappointment, haha. Like it wont be as exciting. I know, Minho was mean for doing that especially after two years and he still didn't introduce Kibum. That's one of the reasons as to why he's a bad boyfriend. Haha.
I know Jinki is like amazing, -sobbing- I want a Jinki..

Haha, I like Jinki's inner thoughts too~ :3. Squee, he's adorable (and attractive at the same time.)
Hehe, I think OnKey are a bit besotted with each other but they don't even know it really.

Thank you for your wonderfully long comment, it was a joy to read, hehe :3. I will hopefully update soon.

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment.

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