[Fanfiction] - Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
100 Themes Challenge
Title: GET LOST (With Me) - [Part 2/5]
Pairing: OnKey, broken!MinKey, side/background!2Min
Rating: R-ish (Language and some Adult Themes)
Prompt: 50. Breaking the Rules
Genre: AU (College), Romance, Drama, Angst-ish
Words: Total of 36,882 words; this part 8,055 words.
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee (oh the shame), unfortunately all I ( Read more... )
oh, onkey date... *happy* it's just so cute how kibum, aware or not slowly attracted to jinki. jinki drives kinda surprised me too. well, who knows that this geek can be so sexy riding his own car with that causal shirt and ugh.. okay. asdfghjkl
did i read minho kinda jealous when he sees kibum and jinki? i hope not lol minho cannot put interest on kibum again, i mean what about taemin?
when kibum said "You’ve been more of a Boyfriend than Minho ever was in all of the two years we were together." to jinki, there i think that minho wasn't good enough as a boyfriend to kibum back then, this makes me curious what does actually make them broke up. you haven't even written that in detail. but i'm not complaining because the present is the matter now, jinki and kibum lol
when kibum run and kissed jinki's cheek.... aawwww... i knew it's going to happen. i can't expect more than that because they just barely dated and know each other. and considering that they aren't exactly dating too.. can they just be together for real? ugh. and kibum is actually sweet here, i get an impression that he's getting bitchless? lol i mean, the way he tried to call jinki back and said sorry and tried to make it up to jinki... no bitch would do that lol and jinki is being a gentle boyfriend there. i don't mind having geeky guy as my boyfriend like him, he's not that geeky actually he's just... he knows how to place himself. omg what did i write here.. it's getting too long
this is getting interesting, kinda upsets me when it stops there because i want to read more hahah but overall this chapter is cute and sweet and lovely and everything in between... i feel like eating alot of candies
okay i stop.. can't wait to read more. ^^
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Looool~ I like that too, I think it's because that was the way I started to like Jinki too, like Key caught my eye first in SHINee because of his striking features and flashy clothes but then Jinki just slowly drew me in, hehe (=>.<=).
Haha, I like the thought of Jinki driving too~ kekekeke. Simple things can be so much more attractive sometimes.
Hmmmm, was Minho jealous... who knows? (Kekekeke, maybe me?).
Minho has his good and bad points, but I think it is obvious he didn't treat Kibum well enough in the years that they were together. Aha, I like when people are curious about my stories, haha. I'm not sure if why they broke up is as exciting as people may be expecting though -worries- haha.
Of course, OnKey is more important, loool. I EVEN FAN-GIRLED OVER KIBUM KISSING JINKI'S CHEEK, how sad, haha. Is Kibum losing his bitchy-ness... or is he really a bitch at all? Haha. I have no idea, I think Jinki just highlights a different side of Kibum, :3.
I would like a boyfriend like Jinki too (=^.^=). That's why I like OnKey as a couple I think they compliment and balance each other well, like I believe Jinki is a gentler and calmer force next to Kibum who is a little more brazen and forward.
I love cute OnKey, heh :3.
Haha, I love long comments like this though, I was smiling so wide reading this, :3.
Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave this wonderful comment.
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