I used to waste my time dreaming of being alive...24/?

[viktoriavampyr]

Excruciating pain. Unbearable pain. Ripping through my body, the agony made me double over as he kicked me in the ribs again.

Oh, of course it was a male.

Only a male would have the strength, the will, to inflict pain like that on a person in such a primitive way.
It wasn’t only physical wounds that I was suffering from.
The things he was saying...it

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[i_sell_rainbows]

Update !!
These chapters are much too short ! I crave mooooore.. xD
This was gruesome; all the pain, fear, hurt.. You capture it brilliantly..
Who's the attacker ? :O He's CRUEL..

[viktoriavampyr]

I'M SORRY!!! *shcrieks*
I try to make them longer, but by then almost two weeks has passed and I go, 'nyeaaah' and try to finish in as decent a time as possible. But I do try.

I don't even know how I managed to write that...?
Gar. Someone may have some answers...

[i_sell_rainbows]

Well, that's okay then.. i just sit here and I've read the chapter in like 5 minutes,and I just want more.. (; But I still loove it..
It's just a gift you have !

[viktoriavampyr]

Aw, I'm sorry...I'll make more of an effort next time, truly!
I have a gift! YAY!

[i_sell_rainbows]

No, now you maake it seem like, like something you HAVE to do.. ):
It was just some help.. :D
You really do have a gift, you gifted one !